Romantic Poetess

Lighting The Fire Of Love

RomanticPoetess

RomanticPoetess
Location
Minnesota, USA
Birthday
December 13
Title
Poetess, Fire Starter
Company
Mystic Creations
Bio
My intention is to write poems of love and loving while fearlessly pursuing my hearts desire. My email address is: romanticpoetess.com@gmail.com

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OCTOBER 6, 2011 9:01PM

RED

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 Red flowers grow outside

 

This room where I study poetry

I want to walk barefoot

In that plot of red

And feel red between my toes

I want to drink everything that

Looks so red on the big red machine

With the big red bottle

Red liquid soothing my insides

Refresh-Recycle-Repeat

I am sucked inside

The big scary black hole

Where my red drink is promised to arrive

Deep inside the big red machine

And then he appeared

Covered in shades of red

As bright as Coca-Cola on the top

Deep maroon on his back

Would he rescue me

As I cry in neon to him

“I-am-not-Coca-Cola-Coca-Cola”

No he passes

Chooses instead the red food

Grapes and Twizzlers

Now I must wait

To be pulled out

Of this

Redish hell

Swirling like a virus

Around my trapped

Talking head

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Oh My Gosh! Gushing here. Red RED! Thank you so much for this. I am going to read it again right now. Out loud.
I do not like colour.. I have figured out I wear back so other people can see the colours of the world like RED.
Of course that is what I keep telling myself..:)
HUGGGGGGGGGG
Reminds me of Pablo Picasso, he said the following:
I do a picture – then I destroy it
In the end though nothing is lost
The RED I took away from one place.....turns up somewhere else.
~R~
I can't put my finger on it yet but this is a completely different tone for you. I like them all, your tones and poems.r
Red is the color which is passion! Lovely!! RATED!
Red... fiery and passionate!
Fun piece. I just read L in the SE post on "Blue". thought I might have missed a Color Open Call. Very interesting assignment!
Yeah, it does seem like a different tone...a very red tone! I loved this!
Red stretched you!

LOVED!
Little red headed Jay calls Chinese people "retards" in Mandarin if they stare at his red hair. They are actually, just curious "redtards"...
A grand ode to my favorite color. Quite nice.
Rated.
a rather curious ride in your fire red coca cola vehicle, RP, and it made me giggle in some confusion but definite appreciation at the end. Favorite line was I AM NOT COCA COLA! [r] libby
I have one red wall in my house and it is generally assumed by all who live with me that the wall is mine.
Love the poem and the new avatar~Hot, Hot, Hot~~
As a red head, (I didn't say without a little help) I am happy to click "LIKE" on this very RED POST!

GO ALL REDS!
Very cool assignment!
I RED this out loud. Love it!
how terrific is THIS ??? !!! r.
Mrs. Muse did not always wear red. Once she favored gray. Now she wears shoes as red as the ruby slippers, and red cowboy boots, and I love it.
I can't help but sing:

~If you wear red tonight
Remember what I said tonight
For red is the color that my baby wore
And what is more, it's true
Yes it is ... ~
my machine bleeding silver applauds this one
Great poem about a color. It's original and amusing. "I-am-not-Coca-Cola". That line is awesome.
I like the new profile pic.
I love Red and your assignment. Well done and A +!!
...willing to step on this new land,unsure about the process.
The echo is drifting into the realm called longing.
Love endures,helps ease the pain.
Haunting shadows.
Light will change the world.
You forgot Red Peppers, Tomato's and Cardinal Lobelia and for that matter Cardinals. Red has always been my favorite color and this poem articulates my fixation with it beautifully.
This is indeed a very different ...something!....tone? ...
no, more than tone...uh, song....
genre of song...
oh, something!!

devilishly absurd, full of joy & longing , and...also...full of red!
and then black. red and black.
Red, the color of passion & life & warm blood,
and
black, the color of ...well, not a color at all!...absence of color...
of life...like machinery.

Poor dear, was it your love of red that brought you to this
predicament?
up inside a red machine?
Thank you all for your kindness and for reading my assignment poems.
You can never know how much I appreciate each and every one of you.
Indeed, I believe it is my love of Red that is the cause of most of my predicaments.
Well said, Red. Good gosh, RP commenting on her own blog!
This is an encouraging development indeed.
I love being around red but I can't wear it. The energy from the color revs me up too much. It is a powerful color.
I want to walk barefoot- In that plot of red.... stunning.
Thank you for coming to visit me.

This poem is different than the rest. But I like it.
How do you feel about assignments, Poetess? Do you like the challenge they offer or find them confining? This is quite different from your style.
♥R