Ron Moore

Ron Moore
Location
Statesville, North Carolina,
Birthday
June 14
Bio
Ron Moore is a Statesville, North Carolina writer, poet, community organizer and night auditor who is running for Statesville City Council as an unabashed supporter for working people in Virginia Foxx country. He is a former Local union president and Homeland Security Officer. E-mail and Paypal: Moore4Statesville@gmail.com

DECEMBER 28, 2010 11:22AM

An empty canvas

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An empty canvas

 

I met a woman

She was a

Blank

Canvass

 

Each time we

Met

I

Painted

 

The strokes

Became

My

Hopes

 

I painted

Myself

At

My best

 

We grew

Closer

The canvass

Filling

 

I

Saw the

Future

It was good

 

I was a

Leader

Celebrity

Man

 

Then one day

She left it outside

I was

Outside

   

A

Storm

Was

Brewing

 

The paint

Began

To

Run

 

She ran

Away

From

Me

 

I watched her

Leave

From my

Perch

 

My beautiful painting

Disappearing

Melting

Diminishing

 

I

Tried

To

Purify

 

My

Inside

With

Alcohol

 

My

Outside

With

The burning Sun

 

A few months later

The canvas was

Empty

Again

  

This time

I painted

A forest

Without me

  

It was dense

It was disturbing

Where did I

Fit in

 

I’m alone

With

My

Paints

 

The

Canvas

Was again

Filled

 

Then

I

Saw

Myself

 

I had painted

Myself

Into a

Corner

 

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Poetic way to express what happened. I enjoyed it. It strikes me that this is portrayed only as a factual account. No emotions are expressed. Was that intentional?
I like this poem a lot...simplicity plus depth, that's the way to go, in my opinion...
I noticed that you never resopnd to comments of your posts Ron. I wonder why, and I wonder what thet tells us? I don't know -- any ideas?
I don't know Gary, that's an interesting question. I guess it never came to mind.............. I always assumed comments were for others and I was a mere spectator. My poetry is ragged like me, authentic in the moment without any particular intention, at least my Washington Cats poetry was written in that way.
I'm sure you care about people, especially since you were a union leader, but the lack of responses makes it look as if you are too self-absorbed. Just an offhand observation: you might attempt to give equal weight to others, listen to what they say and go out of your way to make more of a connection with them. In a small way, sometimes a larger way, it makes life better.
Stopped in. I liked this. Shades of Edward Gorey.