sagemerlin

sagemerlin
Location
Delray Beach, Florida, USA
Birthday
October 12
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Poetry is a medicine for melancholy. Poets write to exorcize demons, capture reflections, provide instruction, illuminate inspirations, spread knowledge, gather wisdom, express gratitude, offer generosity, increase clarity, offer prayers, and generate healing incantations. Poems are crystallized emotions, sometimes prayers, sometimes meditations, mantras,wazifas, chants, spells that become love songs, love songs that become prayers, happy accidents, joyous shouts to cheering choruses, sad refrains, false hopes, grieving recollections, anxious fears. Poetry is the light in the darkness, the chords in the music, the music in the song. On October 12, 2009, I pledged to write 365 poems in 365 days for the express purpose of capturing in verse everything I have learned along the way on the path of life over the past 45 years, but the trick is not to be obvious, isn't it?

NOVEMBER 4, 2009 11:09PM

#26 Why Not You and I

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Every idealist sooner or later
Becomes a realist;
Sooner or later, every realist
Becomes a fatalist;
Sooner or later,
We all throw in the towel
Stepping into the ranks
Of marching morons
Heading stutter-stepping
Toward the cliffs of oblivion,
But every now and then
Some marchers break step
To choose a new direction,
And if marching morons
Can regain their senses
Why not you and I?


Water evaporates into clouds
Snow falls upon the mountains
Ice melts into water
Rivers collect the water
And carry it back to the sea
Where it evaporates again
And if water runs in an endless cycle
Why not you and I.

We all know what's in store for us
A granite marker in a graveyard,
Bleached bones in a quiet crypt,
Ashes in an urn on someone's shelf,
When doom comes for us
We all go one way or the other
Some go kicking and screaming
Others go quite serenely
But sooner or later we all go
For we must shuffle off this mortal coil
And move on to the next one
Making room for those
Who enter stage right
While we exit stage left
But every now and then
Some players get called back
For another encore,
And if actors can reprise their roles,
Why not you and I?

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This poem requires some extra comment.  It was written over a 12 hour period by throwing random thoughts together, then paring down the resulting mess into something resembling a poem.  The original was three times longer than this and, trust me, you don't want to see it.  The piece started with a challenge from my girl friend to write a poem based upon the concept of a pleasant doom, but that concept didn't survive the editing process.

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I love this. I wrestle with these concepts often. You've captured much here and expressed it clearly. Thanks.

And thanks to TnD for sending me here.
the best argument for rebirth - actual and metaphorical - I've ever read....
You met that challenge well! Thanks for this!
A wonderful distillation, an epiphany--one benefit of a good poem. I'm reminded of a line from Joni Mitchell..."...between the forceps and the stone..."
Actually, BBD, I was riffing off two Dylan lines, "I and I", and "If Not For You," for the sounds, not the thoughts behind them, but the truth is that it is pretty near impossible not to find references in either Dylan or Whitman, or both, for any given thought form. I haven't listened to Mitchell much lately, so thank you for the reference. I will have to amend that error, for I have always loved to listen to the hissing of the summer lawns.
Oh, my goodess. Wonderful.
i've always considered myself an idealist, clearly not grounded in logic. but my career in social work and my "hobby" of following politics have indeed started turning me into realist.

loved this from the first line.