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NOVEMBER 8, 2011 8:29AM

A Special Day for the Birthday Girl

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The old woman, who was the first baby born in her hometown on New Year's Day, had always thought this day was special. Not in a egotistical way. Not at all. She thought it was fate, or Karma, to be the first baby born at 12:01 a.m., on the first day of the New Year. Her parents, were also very proud of her date of birth, and loved her very much. She was their special baby girl. An only child, she was always given lots of Christmas presents, but it was New Year's Day she lived for, for this was her "Special Day", her father and mother told her.  

After the New Year's Day Parade, they would shoot-off fireworks at night, over the lake, and everyone would sing "Happy Birthday" to her. She would laugh, smile, and blush, as she opened more presents in front of her parents and friends. Her father would always give her a salute, and a wink. The old woman smiles at the thought. She loves thinking about her parents, and how much they loved her, and this country. Her family were very patriotic, and never missed the 4th of July fireworks. It was almost as though, she had two birthdays.  

She was voted most popular in high school, and married the boy, who was also voted most popular. They were very happy, for the few months they were together. When her young husband received his draft notice, it seemed like the honeymoon was barely over, before the two soldiers came to her door and told her, that her husband was missing, and presumed dead. She was 8 months pregnant at the time, and the two kind soldiers helped her to sit down. They then left her, alone. All alone. The silence of the house, almost drove her insane. She never re-married.  

Her precious daughter, born a month later, was only three, went stricken with a rare form of cancer that was virtually untreatable. Within a matter of weeks, one day less than a month, her beloved daughter passed away. She had no more children. She worked as a waitress in a Denny's Restaurant, for 18 years, until it closed and left her unemployed. Not able to find a job, she collected her unemployment insurance until it ran out. She was then on welfare and food stamps, when they still had stamps. After two years, the state cut off all benefits, including her HUD housing, paid for by the state. She was now homeless, alone, and very afraid.  

The first night she slept outdoors, she was 43 years old. She awakened to find a thief had stolen all her possessions. Her last $20, but far worse, her pocketbook, with the only pictures left of her beloved husband and daughter. A week later, she was raped, for the first time. Taken to the hospital, the detectives, after learning she was homeless, put her case on the back-burner. They were far too busy to waste time on a case where the woman probably brought it on herself, by sleeping around outdoors. The idea of a Catch-22, of sorts, never crossed their minds. They were, after all, detectives.  

She is now 72, but feels ninety. When the do-gooders come to her ally, to try and help her find a place to live, she hides. She is now at home, being homeless. The idea of sleeping in a warm house scares her. What if it caught fire, she would not want to die like that. She liked her little space in the alley. This was her space and no one could harm her, not in her space. She plundered now, through the very garbage bins she used to put garbage in, when she worked at Denny's, so many, many, years ago. It is now Bob's Burger Joint, and when they throw out leftovers, every night, after midnight, she eats well, if the men do not beat her to it.  

She is still very proud, and at the end of every year, when New Year's Day arrives, the excitement builds. This is still her special day. When the city has their annual, New Year's Day Parade, she stands and watches, as the bands march by playing patriotic music. The beautiful people, on the beautiful floats, throw candy, and she never fails to grabs a few pieces, for later. Someone usually discards one of the small, plastic, American Flags, and she picks it up and waves to the beat of the band. At night, when the fireworks are launched into darkened skies, the rockets explode into big, beautiful, bright colors, and light up the world. 

But, it is the end, the very ending of the show, she so eagerly awaits. It is then, that she is given her, ‘special birthday present’, again. Every year, without fail, the very last rockets exploding in the sky are Red, White, and Blue, the most beautiful colors in the world, to the old woman. They are shot higher than the others, and it seems as if our flag, our American flag, is suspended in time, for an eternity, over the dark lake. The old woman, who was born on New Year’s Day, cries, but not out of sadness, but pride. As the colors fall, and slowly mix together, the American flag becomes a myriad of colors, and the old woman, without fail, just as her family had done all those years ago, on her “Special Day”, salutes. She always salutes the American Flag, with a lump in her throat, and tears in her eyes. 

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Wow. Very powerful. Especially the last paragraph - the idea of holding on to her patriotism, despite all that has been dealt to her, simply incredible. Thanks for sharing.
This is great Scanner. Rated with aplomb.
This story is like my favorite nightmare. Well written, though, and very compelling.
Somehow I know how this woman feels and would rather hide from the world than deal with it.
great job Scanner and hugggggggggggggg
Really a very strong piece, Kenny. Rated.
well done - great ideas - save this one -!
We need to take care of our poor and sick. We need to not let people fall thru the cracks. We try. As a nation we have tried and we have done pretty well. It is not easy. We need to keep trying.
This goes very well with the banner.
This is a really wonderful but heart wrenching piece. I'm sure it's more real than we think. -R-
This was wonderful... I'm not sure how to respond with anything that measures this great writing, Scanner. Please re-post this on New Year's...!
As long as there are old woman like that let no one call themselves a man who is not ready for revolution right now in this country!
Fine writing that elicits both sadness and anger--a maybe a little fear.
I remember hearing about all the homeless in Las Vegas on the news. But I haven't heard anything else since then. This made me remember them. And there are signs and have been signs everywhere that we are going for bad times. I worry. I want to be more proactive. I need to think about how I can do this more. Thank-you for making me think.
If America gave to her a thousandth of the loyalty, love and respect that she gives to it, it would rise to be half as good as most Americans think it is.

(Wanted to comment at Viewshound but they are wholly in the thrall of Facebook and wouldn’t let me comment unless I sell my soul also to that scummy seller of private info.)

This writing, as with much of your writing is very powerful. You are going to be one hell of a writer once you learn a bit more punctuation and grammar! Ship those extra commas over to Iraq; they are probably short by now.

It’s amazing to watch your writing grow and develop!

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A story full of hopeful beginnings, despair, struggle and ultimately triumph. The best kind of story. Loved it Scanner, and how appropriate for today.
yikes, scan, u are getting way too connected to the
way awful truth of life.

pride is where tis at.

alas.......
That was beautiful and sad and, strangely enough, happy all at the same time. Thanks.
Scanner:

Is this a portion of what you are working on? Very gripping. Well done (sad) but well done. (Give her a dog or a cat in the next episode, no one should be completely alone, has to be a stray around that could also use a friend).
Kate, the one I'm working on is totally opposite. It is a thriller, in the Stephen Kind mold, except this one is a little scarier, hah!
Incredible story, my God you are good. Sad that is now what the flag stands for.
Breathtakingly good, Scanner. Bravo!

Lezlie
I knew a Marine once, haunted by orders he gave and received, and, his life worked out, but, he also has a sense of how it can't, but, there's still a flag and USMC one too. Good post, as freedom's not only not free, but, not sometimes very ... fun. But, it beats the alternatives that I see too. Big mystery though of why some people's lives go fine, and others, things just don't seem to be very fair. My grandmother also used to warn me that nowhere was it carved in stone that life was fair. Not very comforting, but all too true too.
I knew a Marine once, haunted by orders he gave and received, and, his life worked out, but, he also has a sense of how it can't, but, there's still a flag and USMC one too. Good post, as freedom's not only not free, but, not sometimes very ... fun. But, it beats the alternatives that I see too. Big mystery though of why some people's lives go fine, and others, things just don't seem to be very fair. My grandmother also used to warn me that nowhere was it carved in stone that life was fair. Not very comforting, but all too true too.
Great story as usual, but I have a request; I want to read a story where the person who has his or her last twenty dollars isn't a hard up poor patriotic person but a rich person that made all their money on Wall Street. This can be fiction or, perhaps not.

;-)
You took my breath... Facebook share. Definitely.
Very beautiful words, said as only you can say them.
rated with love
Christine's comment was my very first thought after reading this really great piece : probably not so much fiction :(.

Rated for reality is scary enough.
Oh the stars and stripes..... makes a tear come to my eye...