
The old woman, who was the first baby born in her hometown on New Year's Day, had always thought this day was special. Not in a egotistical way. Not at all. She thought it was fate, or Karma, to be the first baby born at 12:01 a.m., on the first day of the New Year. Her parents, were also very proud of her date of birth, and loved her very much. She was their special baby girl. An only child, she was always given lots of Christmas presents, but it was New Year's Day she lived for, for this was her "Special Day", her father and mother told her.
After the New Year's Day Parade, they would shoot-off fireworks at night, over the lake, and everyone would sing "Happy Birthday" to her. She would laugh, smile, and blush, as she opened more presents in front of her parents and friends. Her father would always give her a salute, and a wink. The old woman smiles at the thought. She loves thinking about her parents, and how much they loved her, and this country. Her family were very patriotic, and never missed the 4th of July fireworks. It was almost as though, she had two birthdays.
She was voted most popular in high school, and married the boy, who was also voted most popular. They were very happy, for the few months they were together. When her young husband received his draft notice, it seemed like the honeymoon was barely over, before the two soldiers came to her door and told her, that her husband was missing, and presumed dead. She was 8 months pregnant at the time, and the two kind soldiers helped her to sit down. They then left her, alone. All alone. The silence of the house, almost drove her insane. She never re-married.
Her precious daughter, born a month later, was only three, went stricken with a rare form of cancer that was virtually untreatable. Within a matter of weeks, one day less than a month, her beloved daughter passed away. She had no more children. She worked as a waitress in a Denny's Restaurant, for 18 years, until it closed and left her unemployed. Not able to find a job, she collected her unemployment insurance until it ran out. She was then on welfare and food stamps, when they still had stamps. After two years, the state cut off all benefits, including her HUD housing, paid for by the state. She was now homeless, alone, and very afraid.
The first night she slept outdoors, she was 43 years old. She awakened to find a thief had stolen all her possessions. Her last $20, but far worse, her pocketbook, with the only pictures left of her beloved husband and daughter. A week later, she was raped, for the first time. Taken to the hospital, the detectives, after learning she was homeless, put her case on the back-burner. They were far too busy to waste time on a case where the woman probably brought it on herself, by sleeping around outdoors. The idea of a Catch-22, of sorts, never crossed their minds. They were, after all, detectives.
She is now 72, but feels ninety. When the do-gooders come to her ally, to try and help her find a place to live, she hides. She is now at home, being homeless. The idea of sleeping in a warm house scares her. What if it caught fire, she would not want to die like that. She liked her little space in the alley. This was her space and no one could harm her, not in her space. She plundered now, through the very garbage bins she used to put garbage in, when she worked at Denny's, so many, many, years ago. It is now Bob's Burger Joint, and when they throw out leftovers, every night, after midnight, she eats well, if the men do not beat her to it.
She is still very proud, and at the end of every year, when New Year's Day arrives, the excitement builds. This is still her special day. When the city has their annual, New Year's Day Parade, she stands and watches, as the bands march by playing patriotic music. The beautiful people, on the beautiful floats, throw candy, and she never fails to grabs a few pieces, for later. Someone usually discards one of the small, plastic, American Flags, and she picks it up and waves to the beat of the band. At night, when the fireworks are launched into darkened skies, the rockets explode into big, beautiful, bright colors, and light up the world.
But, it is the end, the very ending of the show, she so eagerly awaits. It is then, that she is given her, ‘special birthday present’, again. Every year, without fail, the very last rockets exploding in the sky are Red, White, and Blue, the most beautiful colors in the world, to the old woman. They are shot higher than the others, and it seems as if our flag, our American flag, is suspended in time, for an eternity, over the dark lake. The old woman, who was born on New Year’s Day, cries, but not out of sadness, but pride. As the colors fall, and slowly mix together, the American flag becomes a myriad of colors, and the old woman, without fail, just as her family had done all those years ago, on her “Special Day”, salutes. She always salutes the American Flag, with a lump in her throat, and tears in her eyes.


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great job Scanner and hugggggggggggggg
Well done. Very well done.
(Wanted to comment at Viewshound but they are wholly in the thrall of Facebook and wouldn’t let me comment unless I sell my soul also to that scummy seller of private info.)
This writing, as with much of your writing is very powerful. You are going to be one hell of a writer once you learn a bit more punctuation and grammar! Ship those extra commas over to Iraq; they are probably short by now.
It’s amazing to watch your writing grow and develop!
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way awful truth of life.
pride is where tis at.
alas.......
Is this a portion of what you are working on? Very gripping. Well done (sad) but well done. (Give her a dog or a cat in the next episode, no one should be completely alone, has to be a stray around that could also use a friend).
Lezlie
;-)
rated with love
Rated for reality is scary enough.