
Rizzy and Clark were like brothers, closer really, because how many brothers save your live again and again? Both had been in Iraq numerous times. Rizzy had been here for four tours and Clark had done an amazing five tours in this hellhole. After the company sat in the Mess Hall and listened to President Obama tell the nation, and this platoon, they would all be home for Christmas, the two buddies found two bootleg cans of beer and a couple of cigars and sat down in the shade. Two men who taken the Tiger by the Tail, and beat him down. They had won. The world could spin this shit anyway they pleased, but Rizzy and Clark had made it out alive baby, and that's the only spin that counts, in a soldiers world anyway.
As they loaded up the last trucks, they flipped a coin to see who would drive. While theirs was not the last vehicle out of that God-forsaken place, it was damn close, and that was good enough for them. They had plans. Two boys, now men, one from northern California and one a southerner, had defied the odds, became best friends, and were now were moving to LaLa Land, Baby! They were going to try their hand at being stunt men in the movies. Maybe even luck up, and become actors. Neither was interested in being famous as much as being around people like director, Peter Jackson. They were Hobbit fans, and wanted to be around a place that could make fantasies, like their favorite movie, "The Lord of the Rings" come true.
Rizzy was born near Monterey, CA. in a small town called Seaside. He had been a surfer and water monkey his entire life, and had never been a day of his life without seeing the Pacific Ocean, until the day he left for Basic Training . He was from a middle class family, and while he didn't "have" to join the army, he could have lived with his parents for years, he wanted to see the world and and get a taste of life, and also feel what "War" was like. After watching movies like "Platoon" as a kid, and reading books about war, he wanted to know if he would stand and fight, or run away like a coward when the fighting started. He needn't had worried. He was a warrior.
Jesse Clark was an African-American from a small town, also. He lived in a town so small, it didn't even have a stop light. Even so, he lived "across the tracks", in the Black-section of town. This didn't bother him, it was the way it was, and had always been. Why people thought the races were supposed to hang together like a Campbell Soup commercial blew his mind. It wasn't just color that separate races, it religion, food, dress, and a thousand other things that just "is". You hand around people you like, not people who are a certain color. He had to join the army after his Ma-Ma died. His grandmother was the only parent he had ever known, and he loved her more than anything on this earth. When she died, with only some second hand furniture in a rented house, and "enough insurance to bury my ass", as she always said, he was at the recruiting office the next day. Let it be said, here, he was also a warrior and had fought in over one hundred battles.
On the last day in Iraq, the Battalion Commander made sure his troops had a last meal they would remember, always. Close to Christmas, he had his cooks prepare a spread fit for the warriors who fought so valiantly, for so long. Turkey, ham, and the works, fit for the holidays. No person who wanted it, left the mess hall hungry that day, and most were un-tightning their pants, with a grin that only a soldier who has eaten MRI's in the field during battle, could possibly understand. In his speech, his last in Iraq and his last in the military, the Commander thanked his troops for a job well done. He ended with a standard HOORAAA!, and was driven to a waiting plane that left the Middle East for the last time. He hated that fucking place.
As the convoy was nearing the Kuwait border, Rizzy was driving and both were talking a mile a minute, making plans for their discharge from the service, and their trip to Hollywood. They had saved over $10,000 between them, and like brothers, where one went, so did the other. When they heard the first honking from the lead truck in the convoy, they knew they had done it, crossed the border into Kuwait. They had come to a place that in reality, was nothing but a fucking desert, with nothing but black, stinking oil underneath the ground, and had fought a people who loved it for reasons only they would ever understand, and survived. They had survived this stupid war!
As their truck crossed over the Kuwaiti border, the driver in front of Rizzy, with his head out of the driver's side, ran into the back of another truck in front of him. Rizzy had to cut sharply to his right to avoid a collision with the back of a truck that was filled will American soldiers, as was his truck. The truck veered off the hardened road, hit the sand and rolled over. The screams could be heard coming from the back, as the truck landed on its side. Rizzy's first thought, although his own head was a bloody mess, was for his best friend, Clark. He looked over and went white with fear, as he looked at Clark's listless body.
There was controlled pandemonium as men who had been in battle for years, took measure of the situation and started saving lives. Medic's were called, a helicopter was there in minutes, and a situation that could have been catastropic, was barely avoided. Rizzy pulled Clark out of the truck with tears in his eyes, his mind knowing that no fair God would allow this warrior, who had saved him more than one time, to die in such a trivial manner. It was then that Clark opened his eyes, and said "What the hell happened? You are the worst driver in the fucking history of the army. You alright buddy, you look a bloody mess? Rizzy looked down, grinned, hugged his Brother-in -Arms, and cried like a baby!
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RP, Thanks. I wanted it to real like it was the final day, a day that will go down in history, I guess!
Z, I started to kill Clark off, and did. But, it didn't "feel", right. I think we suffered enough as Americans in that damn war, I figured, hell, let him live. I guess I was feeling, Godly, hah!
I tell you: it is the good war that hallows every cause.”
Friedrich Nietzsche, Thus Spoke Zarathustra
How’s about: “Turkey, ham, and the works, fit for the holidays,” Friedrich?
Ah the cause was summed up by Scanner, Mr. Mustache:
“The world could spin this shit anyway they pleased, but Rizzy and Clark had made it out alive baby, and that's the only spin that counts, in a soldiers world anyway.”
Rizzy really flirted with that Trickster god at the end. Good story for the Cali girls.
To jaw-jaw is better than to war-war.
Winston Churchill, The New York Times (27 June 1954)
Miguela Holt y Roybal, thank you very much. I was just playing around with the avatar, I've been way too serious lately!
Donald, thank you my man. That makes it well worth writing~
Matt, I learned everything I know from you my friend. Ain't it nice how a writer can "save" a person every now and again~
I loved the ending..
HUGGGGGGGGGGG
I did not have to do one for your story though, excellent and with an ending I did not expect.
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How'd you get Crank to pose for the avatar?
r.
Oh, and ummm, that avatar. You totally crack me up!
~R~
BP, thanks. I had killed him off, but what the hell, it's Christmas, right?
Buffy, your Avatar takes the grand prize, I love it!
Erika, I'm not allowed on the cover, OS RULES!:-)
Jon, Crank ain't that Cranky when he's Crocked, hah~~
Algis, I wrote this to show people, that men and women also get hurt "out of the battle zone" yet the Veteran Admin., see a difference with the benefits. It's insane!
UB, Thanks. The avatar is getting more attention than my story!-)
Zack, I used to put GoogleImages under every photo, but no one else does, and I am a member in good standing with GooglePlus. Hell, let them sue me. I got a pair of new socks for Christmas~
Please, sir, may we have some more?
I'll wish you a very Merry Christmas as well, but your avatar shows you have a great, ummm, head start ;-)
Where's the other?
You sent to editor?
Send military goon.
SEnd militant goons to Starbucks for some black coffee. No steal any TP or sugar packs.
Go to 'Burger King' `
Rob of pepper packs.
Give to Santa/Kerry.
Go to Yale on GI Bill.
SEnd via UPS adds.
Use Logistics too.
Adds annoy me.
There's crazy.
Kerry crazy.
Why noise?
The adds make sounds now. They are grating against sane Minds. Salon adds?
Turn off?
Peace
Quiet
Annoy
Turn off volume.
Save electricity.
Kerry makes a`
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Grown men cry.
He's a archetype.
And quite a critter
Isn't that Larry a hoot?
I prefer this avatar to the chalk outline one - until the Dude returns.
Excellent writing, my friend!
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Fascism has come in the night
All the lefties also went right
They said, "You're not free."
You said, "Let me be!"
But gave up without a fight.
Don't bother to whine or to cry
If they hear you, you surely will die
They'll take you to places
Separate you by races
And teach you about "Occupy."
You've all become flabby as blimps
You chatter like monkeys and chimps
You talk a good fight
But prepare for flight
You're nothing but weasels and wimps.
So put on your jackboots today
And follow whatever they say
Then bow your head down
And get your nose brown
For fascism's here now to stay.
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