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JANUARY 29, 2012 9:38AM

Dew Drop Inn

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Dew Drop InnIV

Tony Landry was lost. He had to be at the most important meeting of his life in four hours and he had no idea where he was. He left the Raleigh/Durham airport upset. Upset that the rain and fog had canceled all incoming and out-going flights and his lively-hood, his very life, depended on how this meeting turned out. He was in debt to everyone and there were some very powerful people who wanted their money, now. He needed only a few more days and he could pay off all his debts with interest, but he had to get to this meeting.
 
The rain had let up but it was the fog, the damn fog, that was everywhere and seemingly had the entire whole world at its mercy. If you can't see what is in front of you, even with all the GPS hardware in the world you're still stuck, and that was exactly how Tony felt now. He had left the airport in his car, mistakenly thinking the roads would be clearer. He was now turning into what seemed like a motel, but there was only a sign in bright red neon letters that said "Dew Drop Inn". 
 
He got out of his car, walking carefully on the uneven parking lot, which was made of millions of tiny pebbles that crunched under the weight of his body and made a noise that sounded as if he were eating cornflakes as a kid. Crunch. Crunch. Crunch. It might have even been funny, except it was the only sound. He didn't see any other cars in the parking lot, although he couldn't really see to tell anyway. He stepped in a small hole and fell, cutting his knee and tearing a hole in the new pants of the suit he had bought just for this special meeting. Goddammit, what next?
 
He made his way to the front door of a small office and using his coat sleeve, wiped the rain and fog from the office window. Peering inside, he saw nothing and thought the owners must be sleeping. He looked for a doorbell and not finding one, banged on the window. No one heard, or if they did, they weren't getting up. He was now as mad as ever and started kicking the door leading into the office, yelling for whoever worked there to get up, he needed a room and he needed it now. Perhaps they could delay the meeting for a few hours and allow him a chance to get cleaned up if he could get to a phone "Hey...,hey, is anyone in there? I need help goddammit it, wake up. What kind of place is this. I'll have your job if you don't open these doors, now!"
 
Nothing. After a few minutes of fruitless banging, he held his one hand to the side of the building as he walked down the sidewalk of the motel.  He felt for the doors of other rooms and knocked, but still, nothing. This was insane. Surely, he wasn't the only one here. The sign was on and although it mentioned nothing about being open, it did say "Dew Drop Inn". What did that mean exactly? Dew Drop Inn? Some idiot's idea of a play on words. Funny, real funny. He would see how funny it was when he found the manager. He was angry, but growing scared. Something wasn't right. Something was very, very wrong.
 
He came to the end of the cement sidewalk, and the last room. He didn't care if anyone answered the door or not, he was kicking it in. He was going to take a shower and watch some television and see how much longer this damn fog would be around. He knocked and was about to kick the door open when he turned the doorknob and the door slowly opened. He thought of going back for his bags, but decided to check the room out first. He tried the light, and again, nothing. He stepped in just as the door closed and the room lit up like Time's Square, with what seemed like millions of colored lights blinking on and off. The joint was jumping, with music and dancing and a bar as long as the motel itself serving drinks to dozens of people. He was stunned, to say the least.
 
Marilyn Monroe, or her identical twin, sauntered over to him and asked if he would buy a girl a drink? He was losing his mind. He looked over at the piano and saw a man playing "My Way",  but the singer was recognized all over the world. It was Francis Albert Sinatra, his hero, actually singing his favorite song and smiling at him. He nodded towards Sinatra and walked to the bar with Marilyn Monroe. It was all so surreal, he had to play along, it seemed the only thing to do. The bartender, Humphrey Bogart, asked him what he was having. He looked down at Natalie Woods, who used to be Marilyn Monroe and asked her what she was having. She looked up at Tony and said, "I'm having what you're having Tony, after all, you own the joint". And the Band Played On~
 
 

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This should be on television. Wonderful.
Stephen King, eat your heart out!
I simply gotta know if this is the start of a series
or a stand-alone piece. Either way ? It works.
It would also make for a hell of a first scene
in a movie, i must say...

I am so happy you paid attention in English class
once upon a time, and lerned yer readin & writin.
I adore your fiction pieces, Scanner! The art of story-telling is in you. Blessings...
The dark, helpless feelings this evokes are eerily similar to the stage play/film Glengarry Glen Ross. Scanner, you kick ass. Rated with admiration.
You can really tell a story!!! Wondering if he ever checked out again. Probably not.
I can only echo others here who acclaim you as a great storyteller.

I got a particular chuckle out of James' comment......! If he only knew how hard you work at it....
;-)
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Cool story. It would be fun to know the history of the Dew Drop.
Wow, you are so talented! I was visualizing this as I read it. Amazing, the sounds, color, people. wow.
That wasn't SInatra it was Matt.
I have no writing skills at all Ken but even I can tell how your story telling has improved over the last year since I googled a cigar review and ended up here (well on KatmanCross then here).

p.s. Sky has a beard.
I love your stories! :-)
Hey, Midnight in Paris moves a few time zones west. Nice story scanner.
Wow, you had me going, and those two girls singing was the icing on the cake!
I continually marvel at how you continue to grow stronger as a writer every time I read you, Scanner. So exciting! Another wonderful! Rated with excitement and a smile!!
Why take a pill when you can read what Scanner writes?
A very smooth passage from the real into "phantasy", Scanner, masterfully penned!

R♥
Well done sir! I gotta go with mhold's comment. . .
Reads like a smooth novelette in the Twilight Zone. nice work, Scanner.
Very cool you have so arrived as a fiction writer!
I agree with Mattl. May the force continue.
HUGGGGGGGGGGGG
I agree with Mary, this should be on television.
Excellent story
rated with love
Great story, Scanner....glad I was on to read it.
I love the line about the sound of the gravel crunching reminding him of eating corn flakes as a kid. I can hear that. Very good!
Excellent writing - got my heart a pounding again. Maybe I should try to get a job there as the cleaning woman? Hah. Rated with an Ila smile of course. :-)
I was not expecting that ending! Loved it. (:
Dew Drop Inn is in my mind one of the greatest puns of all time. There's got to be one in every town, including the little burg where I grew up.
[r] HAH! Great, Scanner. Reminds me of a Rod Serling story from the Twilight Zone. One in particular. Love how Marily morphs into Natalie especially. Dew Drop Inn -- so fifties in its humor, too. Every state has 'em. Thanks for a great read. libby
Kenny, I'm so impressed by and proud of you. Your dedication to the daily work of writing and to honing your craft are an inspiration to me. I've set aside a minimum of 1/2 hours (sounds like nothing, but is a huge chunk in light of everything else) to write each day. I have the time planned out so that I cannot leave school until I am finished. You are a part of my kick in the pants!
This like a Twilight Zone episode inly with a happy ending. Very vivid descriptions. R
Brilliant! This could be a new paperback novel, seriously!

The Do Drop Inn was my fav restaurant as a kid. We did not eat out that much with 5 kids. They made wonderful lake perch. I thought this was the only Do Drop Inn in the world at the time.
I hope this will be an ongoing tale. I thing of that line from Hotel California: you can check out any time you like, but you can never leave.
Well done and rated.