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MAY 5, 2009 10:43PM

The Farmer's Soul

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He felled the first log
late in the seventies
after scoring booze, drugs
and an art degree.
 
For the next ten years
the farmer hibernated
with 'shrooms,
the gust of a waterfall,
and dark lyrics
as the song the loon sang
muffled in his mind
eyes are red
sometimes blue
often there's a
stonier hue.
 
Then the loon
bloomed
into a wife.
But not long enough.
Soon the farmer was
again alone
and confused
about the loss
of ground, the
loss of sound
near his ear, the
loss of breath
and beat.
He missed the roundness
of her breasts,
her full flesh
exposed 
like cream 
stirred in
the early morning sun.
 
In the eighties,
the farmer
still had friends
but no more mary
jane.  He found
the bottle on the ground,
clear and mental dreams.
He no longer cared
that her hair was 
twined between
his fingers as he caressed
her neck 
nor split as fine strands
jamming the zipper.
He'd found other ovarian treasure,
a scent of the earth
and a touch of quartz scattered.
Sweet hours.  
He bathed daily in the creek. 
Falls came.
Winters, too. 
Years. 
The tables swelled
and rose higher on the bank.
Sometimes he put his blood
upon the raft to float
downstream.
 
The nineties
knew no boundaries
and the loon once again
walked upon his wooden porch
with a new hat,
a scarred wing,
no home.
The farmer,
who had long suffered silence,
opened the door
and much to his surprise
found the loon still warm
and near. 
She stayed awake
and nicked his vocal chords
until one night
he cried her name.
But nature lied,
his loon rotted
the last of his sight 
into the root
of a shredding oak.
Chocolate trilliums
appeared in season
and the loon was gone
again. 
The farmer lost
all reason.
Now rising just to work,
to plow, to drink
to fell himself,
prayer less and spent.
 
I found him there
one autumn 
nearly blind,
vocals gone,  
closer to the heavens
cloaked  with dew
in a field 
of lush green clippings
where for twenty years 
he'd long sown rows and rows
of perennial hearts. 
 
hearts 
 
Scupper, © May, 2009
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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wow, just wow. rated.
Hermosa - beautiful

"I found him there
one autumn
nearly blind,
vocals gone,
closer to the heavens
cloaked with dew
in a field
of lush green clippings
where for twenty years
he'd long sown rows and rows
of perennial hearts. "

Peece

for looking into my mirror.
david J
oh my. i don't know what to say, except to reference your tags:

"solitude, land, green, growth, rot, simplicity, earth, life, time, hands, nature"

and so beautifully put together. like OES said, just, wow.
Moving, unsettling -- now give me about a month to figure out what it means :-)
You four, each such a heavyweight. Solid thanks.
Beyond excellent. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!
Wonderful. That poem needs framing.
I'll hand carry that to the Sec. at the USDA.
After reading that, I'm lost in a parking lot.
You made me feel like I'm semi-demented.
I forget where I hitched my long-ear mule.
Tink, help me. We need to get Arthur and find his ride. Thanks, both!
Gorgeous.
I will be thinking about this one for a while.
Haunting and powerful . . . with vivid imagery that pulls you within yourself. Very well done! (Rated)
Wow, this IS art; strong, beautiful, simple and perfect. Fantastic! Congratulations, Scupper and thanks for sharing it with us. Rated as always.
Have you read Dream by Witter Bynner? "O, my stranger!"
wow...wish i could say it some other way. right at the bone.
Hope is like a pendulum. I feel like we went on this ride with him, back and forth, higher then lower. Where is his love? The land? The work? The routine?

Beautiful post.
Wonderful (from the son of a farmer).
Your comments inspire this writer. Thank you.
This just dances in pure beauty. Thank you for this!
I have not read a poem like this in many years......If you would allow me, I want to read it to my students, to my community, and to my relatives. What is that thing that delivers the words.....framed, so completely in light?
I also wanted to add:
I worked for many farmers growing up, and i know the difficulties they face, the sacrifices they make......either for a silent GOD, or for joy in the fast-fading sun, on a warm plain....
Gary,
Allow you? I would be so honored. Thank you and more.
holy crap Scupper, what is your background? This was mesmerizing
That was absolutely awesome. I will need to re-read it about a dozen more times to begin to work my way through the layers...
what can i say...another gem
hyblaean - so glad you posted, i found your Second Life! Awesome.

Wordsmith - thank you. I value your insight.

Not-good to see you again, my friend.
Scupper, that's an amazing poem. And I think I know almost exact replica of this guy. . .lives on Richland Creek in Newton County, Arkansas.
AS, I am sure he was in Arkansas.
The beauty of this post is just the kind of thing I wrote about today.

You have an exquisite soul.

Does it just keep getting better? Please tell me it does.
Duaneart, First, show me your eyes.
This is wonderful. Love this for the land, solitude and the beautiful impatiens. Very haunting!
Scupper--I tend to be a poetry purist after having taught English for 20 years, so I'm always a bit reticent when I read poems. I couldn't stop reading yours. It drew me in all the way to the end. Then I read it again.

Five Stars!
This is just an amazing piece, Scupper. Beautiful and sad and powerful and brilliant. Damn, that's good
scupper.
I was pushing computer buttons.
I was at another blog site. wow.
Then, I ended up here. Confused?
No really.
Thanks.
soon there will be acres of sunflowers
in bloom, flowers brighten dirt roads
again:` a beautiful poem expression
No nice words here. This is just very good.

I love the flow of the words and the feel of this.
Please write more. Many more. We all need poems.
I love 'em and this place could use 'em.
A+++rated
Just bumping this 'cause I think people would really like to read it.
Hey, I'm doing them a favor
I can't get over the encouraging remarks, and jw's bump.
Mission,
I am new to your page, and so glad the direction is going both ways. Thank you for the visit.
This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful!
Thank You for this
cool beans
Mical, Coming from you, I am so delighted. Thank you for the kind words.
Oh my goodness! What wonderful writing. I love your work. Always let me know when you make an addition since I'm out and about looking for work these days and I'm trying to keep up with a lot of people. I don't want to miss your writing. Excellent!
I have to follow suit and say, WOW! The imagery in this is absolutely moving.
JR and Julie,
Thank you for the stops and feedback today. I've visited your space and feel like I've met kindred hearts, both.
How did this post get on the animated Open Salon Feed? Why ask? I saw that`
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You know`
Judy rated`
She's cute.
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I wear a brown hat too.
We no need theology.
We sense the time.
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Not all is wholly bad.
We no advance bad.
We adore the`good.
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I wandered off.
We share age.
This age era.
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Glory unfolds.
No be gloomy.
I just grin`gin.
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How we get here?
Ma & Pa 'do it`
in corn patch.
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Corn has ears.
Corn see you.
Corn soups.
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You Grand Ma.
No pierce ears,
a belly-button,
or cute-snout.
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No flatulence.
No flatteries.
Ay, fun reads.