Haiku Thursday ---All peach no cream

scupper

Location: North Carolina, USA
Birthday: April 23

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JULY 30, 2009 8:24AM

Rate: 12 Flag

Then

You always took time

to concentrate on my needs

forgetting your own.

I tried to exchange

each touch by morphing backward

merging more toward you.

©Scupper, July 2009

photo credit - fotosearch

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I'm continually impressed, scupper, not only by your poetry, but by your ability to take, or find, the perfect image for it.

AtHomePilgrim

July 30, 2009 08:33 AM

The title capture it perfectly!

BuffyW

July 30, 2009 09:44 AM

That just sent a thrill through me. The words, the picture---like one of those things that startles by its transparent clarity.

Stephen McGuire

July 30, 2009 09:48 AM

You're a peach of a lady, Scupper. I love your thoughts.

Boomer Bob

July 30, 2009 10:07 AM

Beautiful!

Julie Tarp

July 30, 2009 10:37 AM

You're not one of my ex-wives, are you??

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john walker

July 30, 2009 11:03 AM

scupper… a wise person once said – Finding love on a beach is like finding a ripe peach. It’s sweet, it’s good and it's intoxicating!

Love your verse & photo.
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gmgaston

July 30, 2009 12:13 PM

There Comes a Time wonderful
Ay beautiful scupper real sweet
I am gonna enjoy a sweet peach
The best way to eat a ripe peach
Just let it drip. Ya lucky Ya share
I'll stare at a image and eat peach