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AUGUST 13, 2009 8:18AM

Ode to a Dot on the Map

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She was the one
who left us first.
Discovered men.
Threw winks
and a nod
on a pavilion bridge.
She the hip-swingin', saucy
walk-away
girl. 
 
She had that look.
You know the look.
She had leg.
She had curves.
Damn she had curves.
She had butt. 
She had grin and cheek. 
She felled hearts.
 
She was the one
whose flair
oozed from limb
and onto canvas
and onto life
and into time.
Strong, bold,
colorful strokes.
She, the impressive.
What larks!
She burst onto the wall. 
 
She knew things.
I don't know how.
Deep.
Her dynamic spread
and bleed
into the earth. 
She produced.
She lived.
She weathered.
She nailed his ass.
She cried. 
 
She's not the same.
She is.
 
The tsunami
hurled her heart.
The earthquake
shattered her spot.
The hurricane
blinded one eye.
 
She curled on the
brink and died. 
He lied.
 
She is not the same.
She is.
She needs to know.
What now?
She lets go.
Burning inside
she searches for Perseid.
The trellis of
 her smoke wafts
into the early morning sky.
She takes my hand.
 She nestles into my lap
my arms
my heart
my friend
she.
 
 ©Scupper, August 09
 
 
 
 

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This is very complex, scupper, and very rich. I love your comfort, your caring.
I love the image of this walk away girl. I knew her somehow just from your words. Beautifully done (and I am grateful you are there to be her soft place).
This is one of those pieces written from a full soul, a piece that just begs to be read, to be savored, and to be read and savored again.
If this were in a book, it would be on the top shelf. Right next to the Chris Wiman, the Mary Oliver, Billy Collins and the Garrison Keillor collections.
The walk away girl always caught my eye - she did this time, too, through your words and images. Thank you, scupper.
I tip my hat here scupper. This is so good I have read it three times and will come back for more helpings.
I envy the girl.
Good writing, what I expect on your blog.
did you see the Perseids?
You always touch me, Scupper. This time more so than ever. Waht a soul you have.
and the flood gates open...my soul is pouring out on the keyboard...kdjfaoiejslkajgoiglkgdfagka;atork;a039ualsjc,....she is not the same...yes...she is...thanks to the friend.
Scupper, this is GREAT. make/shift has a call for submissions and I think you should submit this

http://www.makeshiftmag.com/submissions.htm
this is beautiful inspired piece of writing. wish you respite. rtd.
gorgeous, gorgeous, tags as pretty as the poem.
Hi Scupper - great stuff, Cheers, Mike
Beautiful! And of course, rated!
I like this partly because I'm not a poet so your writing greatly intrigues me... but I mostly enjoy it because it wove a beautifully shrouded story which begs for an explanation - but I know thats not your style so I'll just have to ponder....thanks again
Thanks for your comments and interesting takes on this one.
Wow! Oh but to be that woman! She!
MAWB, I'm sure you have a touch of such spirit. It shows.
This is very, very good. I'm impressed with your love and your craft.
Rolling, I never saw the showers. Sorry I overlooked your question. I kept looking upward! Too overcast here.
It´s a song. This poem IS a song! How fantastic, Scupper; and to think that you once posted that you wanted to write but couldn´t find the inspiration! This is overflowing inspiration and talent, congratulations.
Kisses,
Marcela
WOW, Scupper. how can I walk away without reading afew more times. You are awesome kiddo
I like this, and I'm not normally a poetry person.
ain't luv a fuckin' bitch baby.
Just saw the latter comments. Thanks to all who stopped. Your thoughts are appreciated.