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AUGUST 30, 2009 11:44AM

A Falling

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Sunday brunch.  A garden omelet that looks like Christmas morning.  Dark Roast coffee.  The slight touch of a  rising September reminding me how much I love this coming season.

 

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 A  Falling

What in me craves September?

The gentle waft of a coming fall?

The memories of my first season among

the Carolina trees?

The last time I saw you standing in

the shadows at dusk?

 

To this hour

the honey-gold of your jawline

blends into time

into my mind

into the whisper of this season

I love so fully.

 

The stretch of contrast

and limb 

a greening going

across landscape

across years

across some internal span.

 

Your arms

even now at post

and stand 

in breadth

in dearth 

about me. 

The sway and grace

of your legs,

the blue of your jean,

the brown of your shoe,

the tread of your steady step.

The memory of you stopping

to gather galax

which does not turn

as you did

to look back

at me

a coming. 

 

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for d, for that september

©Scupper, August 09, last hours

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lovely imagery, you've captured the coming season perfectly.
As my grandma used to say, when witnessing something particularly exquisite and/or fitting: Beautiful, beautiful.
Great, good heavens...pure loveliness! Thank you.
:) beautiful pictures ...
There is nothing like a Massachusetts Autumn! The next time I experience one I'm sure it will evoke my entire childhood.
I love September and the imminent autumn. I'll miss it this year, being in Saudi, your words bought it to me though. Thank you.
I miss this season most being out here in the desert. I really miss the colors.
An elegant reminder that, despite summer's persistent flirtations, autumn's dying splendor is anon.

Rated.
Lovely.. I love fall too. :))
scupper, even your introduction is poetry!
This is so good, Scupper. It's even prettier when read aloud.

And I love Autumn, too. It's 98 here today and I am fairly panting for an Autumn chill.
Lovely, beautiful, as everyone else has said. But let me add that this is actually pretty powerful--I can feel the love oozing out of every word and phrase. D is a lucky person. Rated for evocative language. (Another) D
Resonating with the coming blanket of fall - I loved the sensations you let flow over the arrangement of words this person. leaf in water - excellent.

peece,
dj
Lovely, soothing, graceful.
Those words simply took my breath away....beautiful.
Awesome imagery, rated.
Oh, I loved this.

Somehow it made me think of Eva Cassidy's "Autumn Leaves." If you haven't heard it:


It always touches me. As did this.
Rats, the link didn't work. Here is the URL:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XSXYu-3r1S8
Eva Cassidy singing Autumn Leaves

If this doesn't work, I give up. Anyway, it's lovely.
Seattle, Thanks for taking the time to share that. I am an Eva fan! Thanks all for the kind remarks!
And here I wasn't looking forward to fall.... I really enjoy your poetry!! Rated
thank-you - this touched my senses
This is what I love about OS, you get to express yourself in all matters poetic.
September: fall for you, springtime for me... september is that special month of transitions, no matter where you are. Beautiful poem.
Kisses,
Marcela
The introductory paragraph was delicious enough (I can smell the Sumatra), but the poem! *Sigh* Autumn is my favorite season, and your lyrical ode captures it so eloquently.

I couldn’t help but think of Dylan Thomas’s “Poem in October,” which I hope you’ll forgive me for posting in toto.

—Melissa

“Poem in October”
by Dylan Thomas

It was my thirtieth year to heaven
Woke to my hearing from harbour and neighbour wood
And the mussel pooled and the heron
Priested shore
The morning beckon
With water praying and call of seagull and rook
And the knock of sailing boats on the webbed wall
Myself to set foot
That second
In the still sleeping town and set forth.

My birthday began with the water—
Birds and the birds of the winged trees flying my name
Above the farms and the white horses
And I rose
In a rainy autumn
And walked abroad in shower of all my days
High tide and the heron dived when I took the road
Over the border
And the gates
Of the town closed as the town awoke.

A springful of larks in a rolling
Cloud and the roadside bushes brimming with whistling
Blackbirds and the sun of October
Summery
On the hill's shoulder,
Here were fond climates and sweet singers suddenly
Come in the morning where I wandered and listened
To the rain wringing
Wind blow cold
In the wood faraway under me.

Pale rain over the dwindling harbour
And over the sea wet church the size of a snail
With its horns through mist and the castle
Brown as owls
But all the gardens
Of spring and summer were blooming in the tall tales
Beyond the border and under the lark full cloud.
There could I marvel
My birthday
Away but the weather turned around.

It turned away from the blithe country
And down the other air and the blue altered sky
Streamed again a wonder of summer
With apples
Pears and red currants
And I saw in the turning so clearly a child’s
Forgotten mornings when he walked with his mother
Through the parables
Of sunlight
And the legends of the green chapels

And the twice told fields of infancy
That his tears burned my cheeks and his heart moved in mine.
These were the woods the river and the sea
Where a boy
In the listening
Summertime of the dead whispered the truth of his joy
To the trees and the stones and the fish in the tide.
And the mystery
Sang alive
Still in the water and singing birds.

And there could I marvel my birthday
Away but the weather turned around. And the true
Joy of the long dead child sang burning
In the sun.
It was my thirtieth
Year to heaven stood there then in the summer noon
Though the town below lay leaved with October blood.
O may my heart’s truth
Still be sung
On this high hill in a year’s turning.
L Grandma--I am so glad you added the poem. To each of you, thank you for the feedback.