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JANUARY 19, 2010 5:58PM

I've been sick

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I've been sick.

You know those hours when you barely move

except from the sofa to the bathroom.

The rest of the time

you try to blanket to the chin,

bear the weight of the day,

and suffer the internal wind

across your bones. 

 

The farmer has been

a godsend.

The first night,

slayed,

 the grandfather chimes 

 gaged the hours 

  as I sipped chipped ice

pulled from ale

made with real ginger

 

The next day

the farmer left me as I have asked him

 as a precursor.

I am seldom sick,

but when the time comes 

I do not like others hovering around.

I'd rather steal away in mind

without intervention,

without motion,

without concern. 

 

Yesterday,  in the silence

of  a red sky,

I watched the fog roll

off the tin roof for nearly

an hour  in an early morning opening.

I spent the day cold

sipping more ginger.

Delighted with the accomplishment.

 

The dawn of day 2,

the farmer brought me

a soft wheat pancake

with a drip of sourwood.

"Eat,"

he said.

"At least try."

Before he left for the field,

I heard him in the kitchen

stirring in his favorite pot.

Later, while pulling on his boots,

he said,

"There's soup when you're ready."

 

As the day passed and from

the bathroom window,

I watched where he spent most

of the morning dragging sand

from the creek to the floor of

his green-house in resurrection.

A yellow bandanna covered

his mouth, and he wore his

Aussie hat  squarely

upon his head.

His big boots moved gears,

and many times he stopped

to dismount and adjust the

dragging bar.

 

When the farmer approached the house,

just nigh an hour ago,

he stopped at the stoop

to hang accoutrements

on the black iron hook. 

He removed his boots,

and shook the sand

out into the drive. 

Beneath his arm

he carried a 12-pack

of Canada Dry.

"Feeling any better?"

he asked as he 

moved across the room.

 

 

 Scupper © 1/2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The simplicity of this is moving...xox
A 12-pack of Canada Dry is just what the doctor ordered. I hope you feel better. Sounds like the farmer has everything under control.
I'm so sorry you've been sick. But you wrote a wonderful post about it! I would love to have someone hover ( albeit not to close) over me when I would be sick. It's just nice to know someone cares. I also want you to know your description of the farmer was very sexy!
Robin,
It's not in the poem, but I also watched your DL post today. Thank you for that enlightenment.
Sending healing thoughts, to have a friend make soup, how wonderful. I also do not like hovering at all. I prefer to be alone, but for homemade soup, exceptions are made. r
Farmers are nice. Yeah, they are.

i can almost imagine having a conversation with you -- in poetry.
When sick, it is the smallest things that bring me comfort . . . ginger ale, warm blanket, comfy couch, and no hovering . . . hovering works my last fevered nerve.
Ah, yes. Feeling sick. You do want to be alone, but also to know someone who cares is nearby. I sometimes wonder if getting sick is the body's way of saying, hey, y'all, stay away for a little while, OK? Just let me watch fog roll off this tin roof while the world spins without me. A little down time without the guilt

Beautiful verse.
I know that feeling...except I believe I would be cured faster (and actually come out healthier) if someone brought me things like that. I REALLY want ice chips with real ginger, and I'm perfectly healthy.
Wow, you made illness touching and sweet. Or maybe it was the farmer who was all those things. r
Hugs! I'm so sorry you've been sick. Get better soon!
scupper,
You may have been feeling very sick but your piece is extraordinarily healing. What a fine love. What wonderful expression of it. Thank you for sharing such loveliness in your weakness.
Rated and appreciated.
xo, scupper. Feel better. Real ginger delivered by the farmer. Minimal, acceptable intervention.
Never before has sickness been so poetic.
Oh, rats. Hang in there! I hear Reese's Peanut Butter Cups help... Or maybe that's just me...
What a very kind farmer you have! Hope you feel better soon, dear heart.
There are not nearly enough poems about beer, and this one
raises the bar, scupper.
Each image, each movement, each sound makes me feel your withdrawal from activity. They all come from a distance, from the next room or out a window, and yet there is a friend who seems to intuit your way of healing. This is really beautiful. Be well.
Loved this but sorry you are sick.
TGFF's (Thank God For Farmers!)
Feel better.
Sorry you've been sick, but you seem to have a "farmer" taking good care of you! Get Well~
Awesome.

Rated for the pic too!!
Scupper, how can you make illness sound so fulfilling? Now I want a farmer to make me soup when I'm sick.
This was so calming and still it made me want to get a slight fever, just so I can stay home and get well. Lovely poem - hope you feel better.
What a beautiful celebration of being alive. Even while being sick.
I loved this. Feel better soon.
this captures the bad feeling of being sick, but also the wonderful feeling of being taken care of while being sick. rated.
Even if this is a poem about being sick, it is still simply beautiful and very moving. I hope you start to feeling better soon.. {{HUGS}} to get well on.
Feel better, doll., And thank (and kiss) the Farmer on our behalf.
Only with you does being sick sound inviting! Wonderful imagery!
Beautiful. Heartful. Moving.
Real ginger for you Scupper!
You make illness sound pretty inviting...
I do hope you are better, the old adage goes, feed a cold starve a fever. I know neither is pleasant, they can both ravage your system, dehydrate your body, leave you listliss, and feeling as though your last days might actually be just that, and if you go to a doctor to add injury to the insult, he might tell you, theres no cure for the common cold, and under the new provisions of health care, you might not care to ask what are the alternatives, so just get better okay?
I was not gonna comment. I hate cootie bugs.
They sneeze while they serve `Ginger Ale.
Never let a smelly farmer in bed with you.
The farmers I know got Big lump. Mumps.
They chew tobacco and they stuff pockets.
Farmer sleep in bumpy bib overalls. lump.
Lumps in the pockets are flap jacks. screws.
Farmer stuffs pocket with nail and hammer.
They carry a Mc`Calls magazine to browse.
Farmers fall asleep and eat peanuts in sack.
It's okay. They mumble`Time to Hit a sack.
Farmers want Ya well so you fix a Big snack.
Art,
Only you. This one showers a lot, but he's not in my bed. He still takes care, though. McCall's? Nope. But I know these farmers of whom you write. I know and love them well.
Good to see you back and writing beautifully despite not being well. May your progress continue.
i want to sip the ale made with real ginger... i wouldn't mind this farmer either... there is a nice pace to this poem - well done!
beauty in the language, beauty in the rhythm, beauty in the story, beauty in the stray plain note. this is unpretentious and interesting, two things poems rarely are.
Scupper,

This is me:

“I am seldom sick,
but when the time comes
I do not like others hovering around.
I'd rather steal away in mind
without intervention,
without motion,
without concern.”


I’ve been a little frail, myself, the past week, and this poem feels how I’ve felt despite the different details. Really nice.
This is cool. But sorry you're sick.
I agree with Robin, this poem brings to the surface such beautiful images and yet it does this in such a simple way. This is not your best but it is an exceptional piece of work.
rated