
At Christmas
you surprised me with an old wooden box.
Inside were assorted paints,
brushes and gel.
Five days ago
when the snow started to fall,
you asked if I'd like
to draw a still life.
You are sleeping
and sawing
a gentle swing.
If I look out your
kitchen window
the world is wet,
a blanket now
of winter ice.
Yesterday you cleared
a closet in a room.
You pulled framed
pictures from a drawer
and unused ornaments
from a shelf.
You swept up remnants
of a small child's play.
You packed your wife's
clothes away and called
a daughter to share
more of her mother's heart.
A wool sweater, brown
and delicate had at
some point hosted
a buff-colored moth.
The night is middling
and I am standing at
the door of this
room in which I
am not well acquainted.
"A place to create,
or just to get away
when you are here,"
you said.
A quiet, still room
where you simply
draped and shadowed
a gold-checkered
cloth juxtaposed
with two burgundy apples,
a mountain potter's bowl,
one candle, and the
Biltmore wine
we almost finished
with our meal on Sunday.
Scupper © 2/2010


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Comments
It's been a long, long time. I agree, so much to soften here, yes.
it hurtles from the apex, then it's balanced by what's left of the wine.
the speed of the hurtle can be managed - that's what i meant.
as fast or as slow, as you want - just now it's fast, is all ...
I sure hope he buys all lovers a gift of red roses.
That would evoke smiles and be a great surprise.
Older/Exasperated males smile with manure odor.
The feet walked in barn dung. But, no be suspicious.
Old geezers give simple pleasures and potato leftovers.
gads
Pa Pas Pops don't all have hearing aids and limp parsnips.
Love.
As we are enjoying your dabbing. Get the painting closer to my eye, though, please?
I love art. I only wish I could practice it.
It's all the same. It's in the texture. You are, an artist.
You packed your wife's
clothes away ...
What a find - happy for you, scupper