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FEBRUARY 2, 2010 2:39AM

A Still Life

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At Christmas

you surprised me with an old wooden box.

Inside were assorted paints,

brushes and gel.

Five days ago

when the snow started to fall,

you asked if I'd like

to draw a still life.

 

You are sleeping

and sawing

a gentle swing.

If I look out your

kitchen window

the world is wet,

a blanket now

of winter ice.

 

Yesterday you cleared

a closet in a room.

You pulled framed

pictures from a drawer

and unused ornaments

from a shelf. 

You swept up remnants

of a small child's play.

You packed your wife's

clothes away and called

a daughter to share

more of her mother's heart.

A wool sweater, brown

and delicate had at 

some point hosted

a buff-colored moth.

 

The night is middling

and I am standing at

the door of this

room in which I

am not well acquainted. 

"A place to create,

or just to get away

when you are here,"

you said.

A quiet, still room

where you simply

draped and shadowed

a gold-checkered

cloth juxtaposed

with  two burgundy apples,

a mountain potter's bowl,

one candle, and the

Biltmore wine

we almost finished

with our meal on Sunday. 

 

 

 

 

Scupper © 2/2010

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looking very beautiful scupper - cezanne might pause and say, hmm ? maybe soften the triangular outline - then he'd go and make some notes ... maybe a little sketch ...
KG, my friend was talking to me about Cezanne and blocking. I know not. I am not an artist, but once upon a time in college I painted some.
It's been a long, long time. I agree, so much to soften here, yes.
scupper sometimes i talk before i think - don't touch the outline, yet.
it hurtles from the apex, then it's balanced by what's left of the wine.
the speed of the hurtle can be managed - that's what i meant.
as fast or as slow, as you want - just now it's fast, is all ...
I'm biting my lip on rethinking hurtles and speed. And it's almost 4 a.m. I'm going now to read more of Morgan's "Boone." More color in the afternoon, I s'pose.
How very very thoughtful, that someone created a space for you to create in.... they must care about you very much. Enjoy. Perhaps share. R
Cool for both the painting and words!! Rated.
Wow... for someone to see, anticipate before you might even know, that a space and some paints might be just the thing. That is lovely, as is this space and word painting you've created with brown and buff and gold and burgundy.
You are so very fortunate. _and a beautiful writer_r
Very nice! Thank You....o/e
Well. I confess. I followed older/exasperated.
I sure hope he buys all lovers a gift of red roses.
That would evoke smiles and be a great surprise.
Older/Exasperated males smile with manure odor.
The feet walked in barn dung. But, no be suspicious.
Old geezers give simple pleasures and potato leftovers.
gads
Pa Pas Pops don't all have hearing aids and limp parsnips.
This is so peaceful and lovely. Someone cares for you to give you your own space.
Gorgeous. The thought. The space. The painting. The poem.
A lovely space, a thoughtful act, and much beauty. A cozy, creative place in a cold, wet world.
That is love. Right there.

Love.
Warm, colorful, delicate and skilled, and thru this picture I sense the presence of a loving home. You are blessed, and you are blessing us. (r)
I enjoyed all of this so very much!
I really liked the line about sharing more of her mother's heart. Lovely.
The warmth and wonder of it all comes through in every line . . .
The artist says today we will work on the scarf. (It looks like an arrowhead.) I am enjoying holding the brushes and dabbing into colors.
Wow. What a sweetheart...love everything about this.
this is quite beautiful
Quiet and beautiful.
"I am enjoying holding the brushes and dabbing into colors."

As we are enjoying your dabbing. Get the painting closer to my eye, though, please?

I love art. I only wish I could practice it.
I said nothing about your poem - I was distracted by your painting - it's a lovely poem. I like it when you pare it down to two or three words a line - that's what I mean, by speed and hurtles.
It's all the same. It's in the texture. You are, an artist.
You packed your wife's
clothes away ...
What a find - happy for you, scupper
Walk, It's hard for him. He's my friend and more, but it's like I told him today. He's like ice over a pond. Some places just aren't frozen solid. Losing a beloved spouse leaves an incredible hole in the heart. He's kind to try.
What a lovely way to say thank you (from each of you to the other).
I love the middling night.