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FEBRUARY 10, 2010 7:08AM

Two Hearts

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metro2

 

The metronome

of life

does not stop

for your grief,

nor for my displacement.

 

It is not enough

to pull a cover

to my chin.

It is not enough

to leave white linen

on your shelf.

It is not enough

to paint at midnight

in a quiet room.

 

This circadian surge

between us

follows the unsung signature,

 a simple timing

twinned when two

hearts pined must beat. 

 

Scupper © 2/2010

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your poems always touch me Scup, this is fabulous
As beautiful as it is true. And vice-versa.
Farmers see the folded bathroom tissue.
Some people are resting hyper--vigilant.
That's gooooood. ahhhhhhhhh- O Sarah.
tease.
timely.
rhythm.
Farmer, in one accidental toss of a log for a hearth,
Sarah, falls front-face-forward into pot belly stove.
Afraid.
Farmer might not burn to ashes, so - supper stokes the dreamy Farmer.
Farmers help the room to not grow chilly. Supper hasn't the heart to poke old
Farmers.

(I thought of poems by Harry Graham. I was gone tease Sarah Palin. tease who you love?)
But now no longer "unsung." Sung, beautifully.
Sounds like a song here.
I love the beat of this, framed by the metronome image. Moving and well done.
truly, utterly beautiful.
Stunning structure, loved this.
Like a warm hug. I miss warm hugs.
::sigh::
...so full of love and warmth...and hope
"Two hearts pined must beat . . . "

Worth the price of admission just for that line . . . yet each and every line leads up to it . . . beautiful, scupper.
Lovely gentle and rhythmic. r
Stanza two is especially beautiful. I wish I had written it myself.
I'm am overwhelmed by how beautiful this poem is. Fantastic writing, scupper.
The rhythm echoes the meaning. striking. rated.