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APRIL 10, 2010 3:06PM

At the Outdoor Market: A Man of a Certain Age

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"Why did you not buy his onions?"
 
Startled to be addressed,  I drifted backward while glancing at the dark skinned man selling vegetables.  
 
 "I wasn't sure."  I said.
 
The light was streaming onto his long brown hair, his lean fingers.  There was a small ragged hole  in the tan cloth of his lower left trousers.  His face was sun ruddy.  Dark, expressive eyes.
 
He studied my face and continued, "You are sure," he replied.  I've been watching you walk the  market.  You are silent, but you are sure.
 
You stop and study.  I think you are very deliberate.  You select carefully.  I think you are always sure.  I've been watching you think.   Your eyes tell many stories, even now standing here. You are not mute, but you do not talk."
 
I peered at him over the rim of my glasses.  He smiled. 
 
"Saul."  He said, extending his arm.  "Will you come here tomorrow.  Will you?" 
 
I walked a few steps away and turned to look back over my shoulder, "No."
"Maybe."
 
I wanted to ask him to walk with me.  To drink a beer. To sit on the rock and share.  Why was he selling vegetables?   Was he a lover?  I wanted to go back and buy all of his squash, his toma bella peppers.  I wanted to look more closely at his brown hand.  He was a man of a certain age, a man my junior.  What was I seeing?  
 
The artist was at my side now.  He placed his hand in the crook of my elbow.
 
"You're buying more vegetables," he surmised. 
 
"Mmmm, yes, onions," I answered. 
 
I felt the artist's direct steering of me toward the opening in the lane where the car was parked a few feet beyond. 
 
 
 
 
Scupper/4-2010 
 

 

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Intriguing, indeed. Love this little dropped-in irony:

I walked a few steps away and turned to look back over my shoulder, "No."
"Maybe." (r)
Great piece. I date younger men mostly. xo, Alicia
this is like a painting. and it makes these wispy, floaty thoughts run through my mind. i'm going back to read it again, scupper, third time.
Love your writing, Scupper. You paint pictures.
Oh yes! I loved this vision.
I'm always drawn to what you say. And even more taken by what is not.
This feels like walking on the edge of a knife.
One good thing about the outdoor market is ...
Customers who are shopping for condoms aren't there.
It annoys vegetable growers who get asked`What isle are rubbers.
This was amazing...loved it!
Yes, I want to know more!
you are not mute but you do not talk

that's nicely put, scupper
An artist at your elbow. What more could be needed?
Oh, I really like this. This is delicious. Very well done.
~R~
I was right there. Toma bella peppers and all. Rated.
I can sense the protagonist's fear and curiosity, both equally weighted.
I've felt that way.
The artist is catching on. Soon we will have a confrontation. No? This reminds me of something Maugham wrote. I read it long ago and can't tell you what it was, but the mood is similar. I hope you're planning on developing this. rated to encourage
What a visual feast you lay with your words. Lovely.
This is just perfect. I'm going to the green market tomorrow. I may look at the vendors with completely different eyes. You made me realize that while we are looking at their produce, they are watching us. More than carefully. This was gorgeous.
scupper - "Your eyes tell many stories." And of course when she turns away, the story stops. And your post pulls away from the picture at the end, and I realize I've just been told one of those stories. I have the same feeling that I get when she turns away... intrigued, a little disappointed that it's over.
Even when not writing a poem, you are poetic. I loved this.
This was sensual and delicious. Thank you.