Diffuse minus Specular

AUGUST 10, 2009 1:01PM

When you betrayed my friend

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When you betrayed my friend

I was there 
to feel the pain.

The surface, 
always 
so calm,
quivered
as you walked
away 

My friend
bitter,
yes,
but loyal,
undemanding,
giving, too

When you needed
energy and warmth
my friend
was always your
first love

The season changes
your mood
swings
My friend abandoned
Sweet and cold
you said
My friend
steams and quivers
and you drink
Mountain Dew
instead 

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I'm sure you know who inspired it, Julie.
Specular
August 10, 2009 03:12 PM
not me I hope, if it is me, I swear I will leave the house today- just give me 30 min for a shower and I will come pick you up
hyblaean- Julie
August 10, 2009 03:16 PM
Yahoo mail is down right now (at least for me receiving mail- has been for the last 1/2 hour)- check your os mail
hyblaean- Julie
August 10, 2009 03:32 PM
Jimmy, I needed my hand held for this one :D now I know how you all feel when you read my stuff
hyblaean- Julie
August 10, 2009 11:06 PM