I do not believe that “eyes are the window to the soul”. If they are, I was born without the ability to see it. Someone’s soul, that is.
Chocolate brown eyes winked & smiled while dripping with lies that formed murky puddles of cruelty.
Greenish hazel eyes that once sparkled happiness became broken bits of dirty glass on a sidewalk.
Blue grey eyes that used to dance over my face eventually turned into a frozen pond reflecting nothing back.
I can see the beauty in someone’s eyes, but just as you would admire a smile. It is a physical quality, made attractive by personality. Perhaps that saying about eyes being windows is more meaningful when considering what we take in, and how we let it shape our own soul.
Eyes can deceive, just as hearts do.


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You've written a nice little prose poem here, spotted: vivid and perceptive.
Happy New Year!
Kisses,
Marcela
Pilgrim: Denmark and plenty of other corners in the world! Thank you for reading. :-)
Trigalomaniac: Cyncial? Me? Pffft. ;-) Good point, though...
Marcela: Interesting input and of course, there are so many facets to a person. Thank you and kisses back!
Torman: Yes, we all hide something, don't we? I am fine, my friend. Thank you. :-)
R~
the best deceivers are damn near professional.
this is good writing. cryptic and almost itchy...I FEEL it.
where shall we apply the 'kiss it better' ?
I like eyes . . . but I'm a real sucker for forearms. True story.
I like the ripples I get from this posts.
This was superfine. Pointed and moving and vividly so. What we "see" can be so changeable. In the end, one good heart equals one honest set of eyes.
Beautiful writing.
Rated and appreciated.
scanner: I am no longer surprised at much! :-)
WAH: I knew you'd understand, but it doesn't stop me from still being captivated.
Monkey: Oh great. So my writing gave you a rash? LOL!
Brian: Here...and here...and there...and here again...that's it...keep going... ;-)
Susan: LOL! Not sure how "telling" forearms ara about a soul, but okay! :-)
Mission: Ripples? Shout-out to Dr. Spudman-- I'm honored if they're good ones.
jlynne: {nods in agreement}
Dennis: Always so complimentary--thank you.
Oh, yes. Yesssssss. POSB.
I agree with this but also, as Trig mentions, the owner of those eyes whose soul you are trying to see must be willing to show it to you.
Thoughtful and well written, S_M.
fireeyes: Good thoughts, and we all see things differently. :-)
Mission: Good to know. ;-)
John: But what is "it" ?!?!?!
ConnieMack: Glad this spoke to you today. :-)
Chuck: I favor the crinkly-cornered eyes created by an infinite smile...
Sharon: Amen. Maybe I should look harder next time...
Smithery: Windows are supposed to work both ways--some need cleaning. ;-) Thank you for reading. :-)
BuffyW: I appreciate your opinion and thank you! And let me add: Your eyes match your soul perfectly. xoxoxo
The same can be said for all the good and decent things we experience, and love, and hope for. If our spirit is clear and loving, our mind will be at peace, and the rest will follow.
Know what you seek, and do not fool yourself. Happy new year.
dynomyte: "It's the brain that fucks things up." My brain is usually very logical, but thinking with my heart and believing what I see, has always been where I've fucked up. I continue to work on "not fooling myself"--I'm getting better at it! I appreciate your opinion & thoughts. Happy New Year to you too. xoxoxo
Thanks, Spotted. Eye love this.
Yeah, that's true. Try to avoid the dudes who wear shades on the first date ;)
Frank: Yes, it is what's on the inside that matters most. Here...let me get YOU a drink... ;-)
Smithery: duly noted!
"call me a skeptic, a cynic..." I've been called both quite a few times, so welcome to the club! Thanks for coming over today. :-)
Which have no correspondence with true sight:
Or if they have, where is my judgement fled
That censures falsely what they see aright?
If that be fair whereon my false eyes dote,
What means the world to say it is not so?
If it be not, then love doth well denote
Love's eye is not so true as all men's: No,
How can it? O how can love's eye be true,
That is so vex'd with watching and with tears?
No marvel then though I mistake my view:
The sun itself sees not till heaven clears.
O cunning Love! with tears thou keep'st me blind
Lest eyes well-seeing thy foul faults should find!
--- Billy S. Sonnet #148
Really well written, Spotted, and very true. Happy New Year.
Tags are as good as the post! (I read everything!)
Thank you.
... and this was just beautiful.
BL4: We live & learn--about ourselves & others. :-)
Charlie Thornton: No, thank you! I love tags...
Jill McLaughlin: Thank you for reading today--glad you liked!
Scarlett: The tears are the window-washers. ;-)
kim gamble: Such a great compliment--thank you so much!
cartouche: right back atcha, dear sweet, friend. Thank you for saying so. xoxoxo
neilpaul: Ha! I could right a whole other post about what's in a kiss! I do tend to agree with your thoughts on the reflections though.
Maybe you need a pair of baby blues? *bats his baby blues*
O’Really: Thank you for reading, and while my insight may be clear, it’s always been about the “eternal sunshine of the spotless mind”…
Ann Nichols: Welcome, and thank you for coming over today!
D: {the green eyes smile back at you} xoxoxo
alexis: Thank you!
Kent: I just left you a comment on “George” and I am in awe of such a coincidence. And thanks for that link to the W bit. ;-)
ones , are not always windows but false mirrors.
Exactly.
You obviously said a lot in a few short, well written lines!
Yep. Personally, I think the soul is located in the pituitary gland, or in my imagination sometimes:P
The eyes can be almost scary.
I'm sorry for your cynicism.
Cynicism is not easy to curb.
I've read cynicism is natural.
But, bitter cynicism is so sad.
We all get cynical. It's natural.
The dog eat dog cynic growls.
Eyes can be endearing alluring.
Then, the ugly mystery of enmity.
The lure, charm, and dismay comes.
I am just popping-off and wondering.
The courage to see, and confess flops.
I once heard old Celtic lyrics `flopping.
You just hang in there. Take care. Yea.
You reveal a knowing of 'betrayal' Yes.
But, your so young. You learned pain.
Ya gonna see Life take twist for Good.
Hope.
Beautifully spoken words here, and I totally understand what you are saying. You are a beautiful person with a beautiful soul and an incredible heart. I haven't looked into your eyes but I can see it in your words that you write here on OS. Love and many {{HUGE HUGS}}
Glad you dug this out of the drafts. It’s quite something.
Dr. Spudman: Thank you for your understanding . :-)
Natalie: Exactly, exactly. ;-)
Lunchlady: Glad you liked it! xoxoxo
Surly: Just as I suspected all along. ;-)
Mamoore: You come across to me as genuine and kind—I hope that is what you’ve seen in others.
Nana: Check again—you never know, maybe it’s in your elbow. Some souls tend to move around a lot. ;-)
Fingerlakeswanderer: Thank you for coming over today! Yes, eyes can deceive…
Skeletnwmn: Thank you so much for your comment—you have described exactly as I feel!
Art: Cynical, yes. Bitter, no. Always hopeful, and careful with my heart…Thank you for caring.
Fireeyes: Thanks for coming back a second time around and for your kind words. xoxoxo
David!!!: Hello, friend! Glad you liked this! xoxoxo
Karin: Awww, thanks for the concern, but even though this was written a short time ago, I write about what I know. The sadness or cynicism I carry around is a part of me, but a very small part. I am doing very well, and would love to join you & emma in a toast! xoxoxo
Scupper: Food for thought, then. Check out the eyes of people you know & trust & love. :-)
Good Daughter: Thank you for being such a great supporter of my writing. Glad there is something for you take away.
Rated. Oh, and what Emma said. :-D
Cool.
Chris: Color means nothing, but I do like the thought of a "soul vacation." Much to entertain there.
Missed you while you were away on holiday. :-)
Rated!