Heaven Is You
Does a meadow know whose heart has bled;
What souls have longed, what words were said;
Whose love was just, whose dick was led;
Who kiss’d, who fuck’d, whose tears were shed?
I saw you walk by and I found my gift
I watched your song: a shift then a rift
The beat in the feet and the hips adrift
I prayed the wind your skirt would lift
Without your curves, they’re only seven
By right, the wonders should add eleven
But those who saw were struck by levin
Who wrote your name so high in heaven?
Why wait for death if heaven is you?
Your book, God wrote in ah and ooh
The perfect sphere, She gave you two
And said, “don’t turn, for men would sue.”
Thoth © 2009
This poem is adapted from previous writings as a special tribute, and for those of you who are not familiar with my early work. I dedicate this poem to all maturing women who doubt their femininity or think wrongly—even for a second—that their ass is too big. God bless you all and your beautiful asses.
Levin: Middle English, lightening


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alright got that out of my system.. now.. really that was good.. the beginning a lil sloppy but i like the way it gets pulled together at the end.
Thanks for the beautiful expression.
rated.
I can't begin tell you how much we older women love to know men see us in this light! You certainly made my day.
Rated for sensitive and smart.
You are very lucky. At least when a man tells you that he worships your ass, you will know for sure he's NOT lying. As for the first stanza, consonantsandvowels begs to differ.
Thanks for the comment.
There is nothing I could add to your comment. You get the picture, my man.
Thanks for your support.
Believe me, this "full concerto" is every real man's everlasting hope and dream.
Thank you.
Can add your line to my poem? I know you do, buddy.
I read your work, and I believe you put together some great stuff yourself. Thanks.
This is adapted lines from only 2 poems on OS; part one and part two. Yet I am flattered you read all my 23 poems on all 7 sites.
Thank you.
I take it you are already "blessed."
Fireeyes24,
Let's just say, they get more...delicious. Thank you.
Mungular,
You know what I'm talikg about. Thanks.
Zashin
Why do I get the feeling that you are one of the blessed?
Thank you so much.
We think alike because we're both "real" men; We like the good stuff.
Thanks, man.
The "brain waves" make me love them; the "shakin-bacon" makes me worship them.
Thanks for the comment.
Rated!
Oh, we adore curves around here. Thanks.
Oh, we know that hubby is one lucky dude. Thanks a lot.
Absolutely. Thanks for the visual; it's my birthday.
Why thank you, sir. Happy with your visit.
By "maturing" I mean the moment a woman starts to wrongly question her "growing older" body. This is the exact moment she is becoming sexier, more feminine, and more appreciated by the experts.
Thanks for the comment.
(Levin: lightening) No Carl Levin. It's my fault; it's Middle English. Thanks for the reminder. I added it to the post.
Glad you like. Thank you so much.
Why thank you, I am so flattered.
Glad you like it. Thanks for the comment.
Thank you for leading me on...............!
Very nicely put I agree. For me who is advanced in age AND from the east, it is still a shock to read some words in poems or hear some turn of phrases in a song. Years and years of repression and inhibition will do that.
Well done!
(Sorry I've been so absent, dear friend.)
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It is the duty of every citizen to reverse this wrongful repression and re-establish, as fashionable, the beauty of maturing femininity.
Thanks.
Outside Myself,
Thanks; I am gald you agree.
Owl,
I couldn't agree more, my friend.
Thanks for the comment.
Just Cathy,
And men DO appreciate the "more" woman they have.
Thanks.
junk1,
Glad you like. Thanks a bunch.
Women with big asses are adored and respected here. What you are talking about are called assholes.
Thanks for the comment.
Thanks for the comment.
I know you can "teach" a thing or two. Thanks.
Why thank you Kathy; I actually recommend the readers to compare. Just google: Roethke I Knew a Woman.
Thanks for the comment.
Thank you. If you knew half of what we like...
Oh, a nod, a wink...admiration and worship.
Thank you for the visit.
Thank you...thank you. I couldn't have said it better. This is why you are who you are. I meant every word of it. Thanks for such mature and intelligent understanding.
I am honored.
Oh, I know, you're right, again. We've friends since the first time you beat me to the punch. I am glad it is official, buddy.
Thanks, Andy, for the visit and comment.
On the bright side, I _do_ have the bosom to balance it off, and a small waist in the middle. Not much compensation, but all I've got.
Thanks, Thoth. You're a lovely man.
"The magnitude of a woman's arse is directly related to the magnitude of arse worship." The First Law of Human Universals.
You are simply blessed; embrace the gifts nature gave you and be proud.
Thank you for such a lovely visual and a nice comment.
I've come to your blog because a beautiful California woman recommended your writings. Sheila is wisdom. ~R~
Thank you so much for the visit and the comment.
Oh boobs, right or left, I them adore
Never say they sag; they hug the shore
I'm on it, Kyle; thanks for the visit.
Thank you for the visit. Glad you like it.
What a lovely tribute. Thank you so much.
R
Thanks man. You can call any time
Thanks for the visit and comment.
That is right. Thank you for the visit and comment.
wow...absolutely loved this poem and I look forward to reading more of your work.
This is how I truely feel.
Thank you for the kind words.
Thank you. I am glad you like it.
"Your book, God wrote in ah and ooh" and so many other great lines. Thanks for the smile!
I love them too. Thanks for the visit and comment.
I am glad you like it. Thanks for the kind words.
Sorry, everyone. I had the word "levin" written/spelled with a capital L. I could see why it would throw off anyone. I fixed it...finally.
"Real" is the key word. God, do I love real women.
Thank you for the visit.
Why, thank you. It's my pleasure and an honor.
Welcome to OS.
Oh, no, just this one word. First for the rhyme; second, it seemed appropriate to go as old as I can since we're talking about God and creation. In fact, a stanza with "lightening" or "thunder" would have been much easier to construct.
Thank you so much for the visit.
Your husband belongs to the Real Men Club.
Thank you so much for your visit.
Rated.
I'm glad you like; thank you.
Good for you. Thank you; I'm flattered.
Welcome to OS.
You are very lucky. Thank you so much for your visit.