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Tijo

Location: Illinois, USA
Birthday: November 30

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MAY 7, 2009 5:45PM

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i love our sex but it's not the best

the best comes next when we take a rest

when we take a rest and you lay your head upon my chest

yes, i love our sex but that's the best.

i love our sex my dear sweet heart

but what comes next is my favorite part

i love our sex but what makes me smile

is when we just lay there for a little while

i love our sex but it's twice as sweet

when we lay there later with tangled feet

i love our sex but the thing i'd miss

is your lingering smile at that final kiss

i loved our sex but i'll have you know

i'm about ready for another go.

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Very Beautiful! Incredible. I think the best part of sex is the moments after when you lay in each others' arms and that last kiss that no words can explain.
Very nice! I loved it..Thank you!

fireeyes24

May 07, 2009 05:58 PM

This is incredibly sweet and rich and fun - exactly like those moments after sex - well done, Tijo!

Owl_Says_Who

May 07, 2009 06:08 PM

That was terrific :) Very sweet and a little naughty!

1_Irritated_Mother

May 07, 2009 06:23 PM

The last line says it all. Great!

Steve Blevins

May 07, 2009 06:25 PM

makes me smile

Roy Jimenez

May 07, 2009 06:34 PM

tijo you are a genius!

tr ig

May 07, 2009 06:48 PM

Thanks all. Better than rolling over and having a smoke I guess.

Tijo

May 07, 2009 08:11 PM

oh, this is excellent!!! you're the dr. suess for grown-ups, man. the cuddling afterwards is the best part for some of us. well, that and the kissing before and after. love love love

Theodora L'Engle Knight

May 07, 2009 09:17 PM

love love love this -- so true. sexy & loving all at the same time. Especially the "tangled feet" part.

suzie

May 08, 2009 01:35 AM

Terrific!

Penrose

May 08, 2009 07:33 AM

What a cool little haiku (my-ku?). As a happily married man, I concur with everything you poem conveys to me... "I love the sex" and I'm always "ready for another go" but you're right... there's so much more. I wrote about it too: http://open.salon.com/blog/scrivend/2009/05/07/what_a_woman. Thanks for sharing.