While walking on Snow

tg within

Location: Chicago, Illinois,
Birthday: November 02

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DECEMBER 20, 2010 2:09PM

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The moon last night

All round and a glow

Made each foot step sparkle

On our walk in the snow

You spoke and each word

Hung frost in the air

I felt your love stronger

I felt full of care

All wrapped in the moment

I don't think you saw

My heart melt those foot steps

Like early March thaw

Glistening white

Crisp cool and bright

The magic of snow

Your eyes in the light

The wonder of winter

Drew us closer still

As each step I'm drawn

This mysterious thrill

This feeling it heats

My heart races faster

My loins grow impatient

Your love I must master

For you are my strength

My friend and my lover

A snow flake unique

Unlike one another

The wind blows right through us

The snow drifting past

We don't even notice

The time frozen fast

With each loving thrust

Inside you I so must

Our union is strengthened

The bond and the trust

For howl the wolf louder

My passion a sigh

Your music our rhythm

Let snow drift on by

A storm blows around us

A calm settles within

Our souls have united

Bliss winter and grin

Listen with wonder

This winter time gift

Silently falling

Shaping our bliss

This season of light

Shines brighter each year

When walking on snow

In love with my dear

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Beautiful and tender, tg.
I hadn't ever seen moonlight on snow,
but I have now.
Thankyou for changing your avatar, as if peering through a snow-dusted window ... ( the green of the last one clashed with my other favourites )

Kim Gamble

December 20, 2010 04:55 PM

I love the heat and passion in the snow. It feels like a quickie in a snow drift. Thrusting. Very intense poem with a nice rhythm.

zanelle

December 20, 2010 06:13 PM

Now THAT was just about PERFECT emotionally and technically.

And I'll say it again, I love the way you conjure a season. The stillness, the mystery, the reverence, the transcendent beauty. And emotionally you are both part of it. Whew.

ASH ...

December 20, 2010 07:50 PM

Oh, what a lovely poem! So romantic...!

Neosethian

December 20, 2010 08:55 PM

A snow flake unique
Unlike one another

Your music our rhythm
Let snow drift on by

Great lines..... and I love the contrast between the cold of winter and the passion of love.