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tg within

Location: Chicago, Illinois,
Birthday: November 02

Title: Owner/Stylist
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DECEMBER 29, 2010 4:22AM

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I made an oath

the promise strong

a Song of love

of future blood

I promised your mother

long and hard

to care and teach

her easy bard

to always provide

unbiased love

to open my heart

for gifts above

all that comes

from my loins doth share

this journey we start

tonight with care

long I have known

her knowing light

longer still her beautiful

foresight

our family beginning

this desire strong

so my promise this

I sing with a Song

this Song of love

nightly we share

tonight we begin

our plan will bare

each one of you

a future bright

brilliant and strong

so full of light

this moment together

the rise and the fall

the rhythm of passion

heated merger of all

timed rightly just so

sealed sweetly I trust

this deal with my love

I give with my trust

as long as our song

is strung with one mind

this Hymn from within

comes easily mine.

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Meaningful thoughts, have you put a melody to them?
Are you sending any of your posts to Dave for the competition?
R

Out on a limb

December 29, 2010 04:32 AM

Yes, I sent him my three favorites, Master of a Nation,Angel Mine, and Wings of Wisdom. Thanks no melody yet. What are you doing up so very late? Me...way to much on my mind.

tg within

December 29, 2010 04:44 AM

You're a good man...

Patrick Frank

December 29, 2010 06:20 AM

Beautiful!

BTW: I don't visit OS much anymore so let me wish you a Happy New Year filled with love, laughter and good fortune. I've enjoyed reading your work. Don't stop writing!
R

Donna Carbone

December 29, 2010 09:00 AM

An extremely touching hymn to your family. I'm sure they deserve it.

Leon Freilich

December 29, 2010 11:02 AM

Enjoyable poesy!
And who's Dave?

Fred Hallman

December 29, 2010 12:57 PM

After visiting and listening to parents. This poem came to me as I wished it was what my father would have promised to my mother. I know I would have if starting a new family.

tg within

December 29, 2010 05:02 PM

I like everything about this poem. The sentiment, the rhythm...everything.

Fay Paxton

December 29, 2010 05:28 PM

A father's hymn to the future blood, as if he can see the child to be; a hello promise before the journey starts; an intriguing reversal of sad farewell!