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tg within

Location: Chicago, Illinois,
Birthday: November 02

Title: Owner/Stylist
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APRIL 9, 2012 4:17PM

Rate: 7 Flag

There is a sudden distortion

Associated with extension

Off balance now

The score somehow

Has drained the very mention

Sore money in porportion

The fall complete surprise

Blindsighted from the rear

I fear

Is one hypocrisize

Manipulation is their bent

Distruction their intent

The spineless trickle

Is quite fickle

Your WAD will soon be spent

The Law The dream

The high supreme

Excessive greed

With wreckless speed

Has braced this crooked sceme

There is a way to stop this thief

Tis' simply and direct

Swap good for bad

And end the source

All others will deflect.

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Well, yeah but how!?
"There is a way to stop this thief

Tis' simply and direct

Swap good for bad

And end the source

All others will deflect."

I mean, that is easier said than done.
I am sure glad u said it though.
Reminds me of Jesus, who said
he was gonna come back like "a thief in the night/to
replace wrong with right"...

as jim morrison admonished: "we need a Soft Revolution"

James M. Emmerling

April 09, 2012 04:35 PM

Yea James, Take away the cash, put it in your own account. Thanks for the true comment...it is the easiest way forward.

tg within

April 09, 2012 05:16 PM

I feel ya'! Just Say NOOO!!!

I have to tell you: I like that snake and I think your new avatar could be an album jacket or a book cover!
R

ASH ...

April 09, 2012 06:30 PM

If it could be that easy!

Lunchlady 2

April 09, 2012 08:25 PM

Right. Thanks ASH solidarity for the hood!

It should be. LL Really.

tg within

April 09, 2012 08:33 PM

I wish it were so. You certainly wrote a beautiful poem to express our collective frustrations.

Lezlie

L in the Southeast

April 09, 2012 08:39 PM

what was this called??????????? Congress?

Blinddream

April 10, 2012 07:52 AM

That last stanza is a tremendous call to action and reminds me this morning of the path I, too, am on. Very difficult stuff. Very difficult. My heart goes out to you, and feels right along with you. Great poem. Rated with admiration.

Michelle Coulter

April 10, 2012 08:07 AM

No WhIPLASh, which I get every time I hear another madening fact about the corruption of MONeY in this F+*$$ED up Country. Thanks for following along. So many of you write about this as well. BUT ALEC needs to be shut DOWN! AND yes I'M SHOUTING.

tg within

April 10, 2012 09:19 AM

Thanks Lez, BD, and Michelle. We do need to keep after the trail of BIG $$$. They are so brazen now...it's easy to call them out.

tg within

April 10, 2012 09:23 AM

I hear you and agree. Well said. R