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MAY 13, 2012 9:48AM

A Substitute Just Won't Do

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  mom

[There is no other... MOM!  I lost mine too early, but have come to realize that she is always with me, even when I wish she wasn't. So for all out there... cause who do they scream for... we all have a mom.]

A substitute no

just won't do

a substitute fills in

the who

but what about the

when you do

or where it hurts

no other will

kiss or change

or even burp.

A lesson learned

from just a dad

is lacking most

and sometimes bad

for heart is what

your mother adds

and tender touch

when

badness has

trumped up the

situation of...

what if

how come

or why

Because...

A substitute will

just not care

no part time

sitter

or au pair

The lesson here

is simply this

remember who

was your

first kiss.

And don't forget

the what

she's done

for she is yours

your only one!

Where Sunday ends

all other days

your mother

she has

her special ways.

 

2012 © TGWITHIN

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Thank you for this
~R~
Softly spoken yet plain enough to see.
TY
Lovely poem, and very true. There is no substitute for that special person that kissed you for the first time...
So very true tg, written with a lot of wisdom.
Hope you enjoy your day.
Happy Day to ya'll mothers!
Beautifully said. I am so glad there is a special day for moms. There is no substitute for mom. R
tg within:

I lost my mother in early life,and I guess I have not overcome the loss,ever.She died 1-1/2 yrs after my father.
The only consolation I have had was that she followed him.
Your poem is very much to the point:
Mother is mother.
No substitute will do.
Thank you for sharing your innermost thoughts and feelings.
~rated~
T:
Thank you for the mother's day wishes as I happen to be a mother,too.
I feel comforted by your words.
There is no other like mother. Moms rule. Thanks for the reminder. R