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2012 Release of Oil For Olive! All words and art contained here within this blog are the sole property of tgwithin (c) copyright 2013. Most are my own. But I love to share, just ask me.

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JULY 8, 2012 10:09AM

The Long Way Down

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The long way down

and to the right

the wrong way down

far out of sight

the edge of  precipice

The edge of precipice knows the flight

naturally lost

and way out of sight

and still it craves

for a stroll to sooth

mossy steps

climb down these steps

from which to loose

the rocky rescue

for which to choose

Rocky Rescue

The upper hand

with it's ravenous bite

the vanishing land

as it slides out of sight

Morning Invasion And morning persuasion

with military cadence

marches backwards

from past invasions

Brinny Bits 2The briny bits

of bloody carnage

the pogrom

the slaughter

the odor of dot-comMorning Curves Yet morning curves

wain waxing the board

for a union lured

 ebbs right from the hoard

The Way Broken

The way broken

washed up

on the path to the right

down the wrong way  

should he continue his flight

climbing lines

Climbing lines

without ropes

using more than just hands

up the cliff lines of hope

Measuring skills

commonly honed

surely the left

up the hill

must we roam

Back up the Path

Back up sunny path

past founding salt loam

the choice now is clearly

the long way home.

 

2012 (c) tgwithin

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Beautiful balance between words and images
~R~
Words and Images....perfect.
Thanks ya'll. Gotye sings to the same point in Eyes Wide Open, enjoy.
Ροetry in image and image in ρoetry, beautiful and strong work, Tg, thank you for sharing!!
This is wonderful!
Woah. This was a delicious journey, I mean this. It was a sore, a fright, at first. Why would anyone want to go down into that shoreline that would most certainly cut up your heels? But -- oh, I love the one you painted (pained?) green. Slippery moss - toss off your shoes. And -- that building. What an odd juxta. I mean - to live there might be a treat, the view - but the ascension, and descension? It's an anthem, it's a metaphor. The words, oh-so perfectly placed. This is a reaaaally, really lovely piece'a work, pal. Kudos, and R's R's R's. xox. Pea
gorgeous. I used to run here last year! Your vision is sublime.
Lovely - my favorite, the last one and the glimpse of home.
I'm taking that long way home soon.

Nice piece tgwithin.
Hey look you guys found me. Did you play the song? Please play the song and reread this.:D
the briny steps down
to Poseidon's throne