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2012 Release of Oil For Olive! All words and art contained here within this blog are the sole property of tgwithin (c) copyright 2013. Most are my own. But I love to share, just ask me.

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AUGUST 24, 2012 10:51AM

For Rant Shall Rate Reap Naught

Rate: 16 Flag

 

[Don't make me have to spell it out for you. Cause' I will. This poem then, is for all of the un-read, un-rated, starving artist out there. Isn't it time? Surely there is room for us all in here.]

gossip

 

 

I read

I rate

I understate...

Meditate on this.

I think

I pour

Trying to ignore

Extreme wordiness.

So easy this

Pontification

Make it

Grande adulteration.

Simply put

Straight to the point

Clearly state

Unction, anoint.

 

A Poet sings

A Soul flies

A ring of fools

Investiture lies.

Who can say

What speaks to those...

Inspiring one

Disguised, impose.

 

 Forthright with word

A higher power

If I choose

Which to devour,

For glory

In one's lifetime spared

the poet is disparaged.

 

For liturgies

of prose well worn

is subject of the norm.

Poor rhyme

it knows...

the simple sing,

then celebrate the papal ring.

 

And I

Shall rate, participate

From bounty

Pull my thoughts,

 

For heaven knows

The likes of those

For which I'm gifted naught.

 

[Gossip - By Moi]

Tgwithin © 2012

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Those that have want more
those that give...
bleed.
Right? I knew you counted Steel!
To you as well Sparks! Let em' fly!
Reading good poetry like yours takes time, care and thought. Many just want to read, rate and hope for a reciprocate. R
So true Gerry. That's what takes me a long time. But I'm learning that there are a few worthy posts and they are where my energy goes. Besides if I comment back does my audience really come back to read my response or do they move on. At least...they should be kind enough to rate and keep you (the piece) in the feed. There are no winners or losers here. Thanks. tg
Tg, I like your work, but more of it here I like this idea that fights this awful reality...

''...This poem then, is for all of the un-read, un-rated, starving artist out there. Isn't it time? Surely there is room for us all in here...''

Rated for all that there is in your work.
Thanks SS. You are the only woman w/ guts to reply!
Oh TG. Magnificent. And the first comment you write bowls me over in its truth. You are a talent with such a big heart. I feel that big heart and genuine good soul whenever I visit here. Much love to you. Rated with admiration.
Saying much with such a judicious use of words gives me more time to ponder with less risk of distraction. Yea! rated...
Thanks guys I hope this is heard. It isn't easy to be simple...:D
Simply put

Straight to the point

Clearly state

Unction, anoint.

~
i could get behind a movement to unction.
without all that goddamn oil, though.
oil
ought to be used only in sexplay, i say!

those damn religious idiots always get there before us.
with their anointing & whatnot.
Reading this, re-reading, re-reading again....
rated first.
Some you know you can rate before the read. : )

Reciprocating reads and comments are hard for me, on my own page, on another page...I try.
I do go back and look for replies. Do you?
*Where* is that banner photo taken!?
Wowza!!
Thought provoking and sad. Well done.
It's so great when you realize you didn't gather all there was on the first pass and you read, re-read, repeat. That's a good thing.
Yes I go back and read comments JT. But I like to let the thought flow. Sometimes(like now) I do come back and comment as well.
I believe Poetry takes much time to digest and understand. That's the beauty of it and so you must re-read.
Nobody told me to strip, I thought it was the natural thing to do when I came in here...excuse me...
...and you are my first rate.