Tinkerertink69

Tinkerertink69
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When I grow up, I wanna be a space pirate or the ice cream man! I will write stuff, maybe true, most time not. Your job is to read and maybe nod. Try not to fall off the wagon, it hurts!

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NOVEMBER 20, 2009 4:54AM

Fiction Friday --- IN LOVE

Rate: 22 Flag

For the folks who dig my serious side, I don't show it enough which is probably good!!


You came up to me and said, “I am in love with you!”  And I think I made you mad, when I said to you, “I am in love with my boss!”

 

And you got really quiet, you stopped talking, for just a second, long enough for a breath to be heard and then you said, “I’m in love with you….I’m being serious”

 

I nodded. You just stood there staring at me, wondering when my next phrase would be.

 

“I’ll call you tomorrow…”  I said, and walked away

 

Why does such a small phrase cause so much trouble, “I’m in love with you” well, more to the point the reply, “I’m in love with my boss!”

 

That last phrase always seems to make people get quiet. 

 

Why couldn’t I just say, “I’m in love with you too!” and then the famous last scene kiss and fade to black.

 

It should be that easy, just to say it in reply, but for some reason it isn’t, even if it’s true.

 

It’d probably be easier to say if it wasn’t true, just some words, a playa’s creed, “I’m in love with you too!”

 

It’s a phrase, just a phrase, words, but hell, they can make people fall from grace, fall from Heaven’s embrace, cry like a baby, yell out in anger, a dangerous phrase, a quieter of epic proportions.

 

Later on, the phone rings. 

 

It’s her.

 

“Did you love me too?”

 

Silence.

 

“I’ll understand if you don’t, if it’s just a game with you!  I won’t ever mention it again.”

 

How come it’s not easy to say it, “I am in love with you too!” but I can’t say it, not easy at all, even though it’s true.

 

“I love you” she says and hangs up the phone. 

 

I’m just sitting there, holding the phone, “I love you too….”


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"Love Is A Burning Thing
And It Makes A Fiery Ring
Bound By Wild Desire
Tink Fell Into A Ring Of Fire
And he burns, burns, burns, in Indiana...in Indiana."

I'm so sorry... the evil monkey in my closet made me sing this. : )
Damn that evil monkey, he made me sing along with you!! ;)
I heard there were evil monkeys to be found here.....yes! Here you boys are.
O'Really? Yes, the evil monkeys are here, as they always are!! ;)

Tink's Safe Haven for the Evil Monkeys.
Tink - you're losing your touch - is this Tink? short and sweet...that's not myTink, Tink, Tink...or is it...

this made me think, funny, I think I'm falling in love but for the first time, I'm not anxious for the words, he has to say them first when he's ready and I'll respond right then, not torture him like I do sometime with other responses...these days I'm more into showing the love, than telling the love anyway...are you sure this is Tink? Just show and tell her!!
Love, soft as an easy chair..,Love, fresh as the morning air..,Ba-wa-wa-ra's, nose, big as an ugly bear! I just love that song!
R~
Besides the issue of sexual harassment, you could just take your clothes off.
Did I date you a few years ago?!
Leonde, it is I, only shorter, to the point, like my head!! Teeheehee!! But I...okay, I'll come out and say it, I LOVE YOU!! God that was tough!! Now what? ;)

scanner, damn you, making me cry again. I LOVE YOU TOO!! Crap, now I've stepped into it. *boohoohoo*

old new lefty, yeah, I did that already, P.S. I'm scheduled for a 'discussion' with HR today about my 'attitude' and 'misdirection' of the current policy on sexual harassment.

Sheesh, I mean, I thought they said, "Take off your clothes and grab her ass!!" during that class. Apparently not!! :0(

Swinglemom, maybe!!!! :)
Have you been watching Jerry Maquire again, Tink?!~
Ah Tink! You obviously love her or you wouldn't have written this. It was beautiful and sad. Wonderful read.
rated
Is there a 12 step program for evil monkeys.
tai, maybe. Why? :)

micalpeace, it's true, I do, but alas, it can never be, truely, she's VP of HR!! :-( ~grin~

OESheepdog, the answer is yes, line is to the right!! :)
I like it, Tink. Captures extremely well one of those truly horrible moments in life....
sad but true. nicely written! rated !
Good stuff Tink. So true, what you write here. But I've never loved a boss of mine. None of them really lovable I'm afraid.
Boanerges1, thanks very much!!!!!

ramblin_rose, and thanks to you as well.

GJIPenguin, well, someday I'll introduce you to my boss, he's very loveable!! ;)
Short and sweet...or bittersweet...a glimpse, a snippet, a cameo, of one of life's awkward moments. How do you say words you fear to say? How do you lay yourself open to a chance of pain and loss?

Well written Tink and a side of you I have not read before.

Rated.
beautiful, sad, real... excellent!
“I’ll understand if you don’t, if it’s just a game with you! I won’t ever mention it again.”


It was my boss Jenga's voice on the phone, and as I listened, a million thoughts ran through my head at once. She's a wily woman and she knows it. She's playing with my heart like its silly putty. To her I'm probably just another trivial pursuit. Sometimes she treats me like I'm a Mister Potato Head or something. Somehow I've got to let her know I'm not just another pretty face.

...
Evil monkeys are everywhere. You just have to stare them in the eyes and know who's boss. It ain't the monkeys!
Awwww . . . love hurts.
Torman, *nodding* Yeah, it's not a side I show too often, leaves the underside, the vunerable side, exposed. Thanks!!! :)

lorianne, thank you very much!

mr e, *tears* Your lastest story made me cry. I like playing games, especially Twister. :( :)

LuisG, I just remember what my grandpappy told me just before the State threw the switch, he said, "Boy, you can train a retarded monkey to fly a 747, but in the process, there will be lots of crashes!!"

I still remember that, and the evil monkeys just don't seem that evil anymore. *tears*

:)

Owl, yes it does!! ~nodding~ but I've also been told, it's better to have loved and lost, then to have a sharp stick poked up your bum.

*nodding*

*(Disclaimer --- I didn't get too much sleep today, but it's cool, it's my Saturday!! NO SCHOOOOLLL!! :D Plus, I got to catch up on my readings here.....)
Repeat after me I love you, again, I love you....see not so hard
They say practice makes perfect! I like this serious tink, I think ;)
I.....*stumbles*....l.....llll....ooooo......v.....I lust you!!

Wow, that wasn't that hard!! ;)

I try to be serious every once in a great moon, keeps the tourists away!! ;)
Yes it does!!

Stupid love!!!

*:(
When love (s)Tinks use the litterbox. Same with those damned monkeys. Always throwing poop.

Getting ambushed like that always sucks. It's like having a woman ask you if a dress she's wearing makes her look fat. "Compared to what?" is my answer of choice. Usually stuns them long enough for me to make a quick getaway.

Make love. Not war.
Wow! Didn't see that coming! Tink's serious side. Thanks for the peek! I enjoyed it! ;)
Ah, Love...ain't it grand?
Rated.
Chris, yeah, that's another question not to answer with a joke answer, end up in hospital, waking up from coma!! NOT FUN!! :( ~grin~

zashin, ahhh thanks. You're welcome!! :)

ShanMitchell, ~nodding~ Yes it is!! Thanks!!!
I can dig it.

For some reason, I instantly thought of a moment when I was in EWs kitchen, about 2am, we had been hanging out( just friends at this point) and he says to me:
"Listen, it's getting late..."
I thought he was gonna kick me out.
He didn't.
Instead he told me how much he really has been wanting to kiss me.
He had been holding back for about 3 months...
I'm so glad Trudge-grafitti pointed me here to this little vignette. rated.
spotted mind, *nodding* A lot of guys usually hold back, I think for like my reason in a lot of my relationships, fear of rejection. I knew of a few chances I had but I let them slip through my fingers. *nodding*

Caroline, thanks for stopping by and reading it. :)