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toritto
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tampa bay metro, Florida,
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September 10
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I was born in year 4 of the reign of the Emperor Tiberius Claudius and raised on 66th Street and 13th Ave. in Brooklyn. And Coney Island, Traveled the world. Married my high school sweetheart and stayed together 40 years. Now a retired old widower crank living in Florida with my cat. Author of "Initial Verses" - a collection of poems on love, loss, poverty and war.

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JANUARY 22, 2012 11:04PM

American Guernica

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In a dream the guns came out

drowning out the voice of reason

unheard the cries of little children

no one cared who fired first.

 

One side killing all the godless

the other murdering the priests

both were hunting reason’s voices

the middle ground a no-man’s land

 

No longer could we hear each other

above the roaring of the guns

we listened only to our comrades

true believers in the cause.

 

And then I saw the little boy

eye his mother as he died

I knew that with him died the nation

my country would exist no more.

 

In my dream I took a brush

although I knew I could not paint

and on a shattered building’s wall

emerged American Guernica.

 

Originally published in Fictionique

http://fictionique.com/?p=11360

©Toritto (words) - 2012

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As I know this painting intimately, this touched me deeply.
Amazingly apt view of American empire.
my new favorite of yours. how i wish i could grab my paintbrush.
"Guernica" is a timeless reminder to everyone about the horror and tragedy of war; so is your powerful poem.
You did a great job of incorprating this artistic masterpiece into verse.
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Powerful, Toritto.

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Just got around to reading this. Like DjS, I find the word "guernica" alone packs a powerful punch and its not a breakfast table poem, if ya know what I'm sayin'.

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