So the "totalcreep" persona is similar to some other commercially successful masculine parodies and personalities ("The Man Show," Neil Strauss's "The Game," etc.). But one thing that makes those personalities successful is that they're also very likable. Corolla and Kimmel have a self-deprecating edge to their humor; when "The Man Show" kept its same format but switched to the cruder Rogan and Stanhope, it lost most of its fanbase—of /men/. Strauss opens "The Game" with Mystery's complete nervous breakdown and loss of confidence. This is how we're able to identify with Mystery throughout the rest of the book; without it, "The Game" doesn't work.

You've set out to create an unlikeable persona with totalcreep, and you've succeeded. It makes this persona very difficult to market, and impossible to launch you to fame.