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DECEMBER 25, 2010 11:49PM

Eggshells

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 Tortoise-EggShells

  

I tripped over

the eggshells

again.

 

I’m supposed to tiptoe

but sometimes

they are scattered

where I don’t see them.

or I didn’t think it mattered;

or they just appear

where a moment before

they did not exist –

so the path that least resists-

is taken.

 

 

Sometimes I forget.

(I have not seen them

for so long)

A simple conversation

turns –

There’s neither right nor wrong;

but the eggshells emerge

decisions are made

on the spot

or not.

depends.

 

To walk upon them

or confront them head on;

Turn my back;

avoid the confrontation.

or keep on track;

defend my reputation

what will cause least disruption

in the end.?

 

I tripped over

the eggshells

again.

 

 

I could just walk on top

but then pay the price

of broken eggshells

in my life.

 

I’m adept at walking on eggshells.  I’ve done it all my life.

Sometimes I wish to hell that I would just sweep them up.

 

 

 

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I get this, maybe in a different sense, but yea I get this. Beautifully done...
I understand this.,. did this for 25 years..
rated with hugs
Masterfully written - the tension is felt throughout. I understand your wish.

::hug::
Actually hurts to think about someone else living thru that, yet I guess we all do to varying degrees. I hate the tiptoeing I do too. Especially when I catch myself doing it automatically (again!).

Do sweep em away, tril.

Awareness, acceptance, action. Rated for the three A's
I am with the last statement on this matter.
You can sweep them up but they just come back. Always there just beneath the surface. Glad you brought the subject up for the holidays when they litter the landscape.
Grand writing, fine post filled with trepidation and desire to wipe the slate.
Rated.
sounds like you started Festivus already - with "The Airing of The Grievances" kinda hard to skip that part, ain't it.
Tril, I hate thinking that this might have been your Christmas Day ... but I know all things are possible ... even having to tread on eggshells on Christmas Day.

But what a wonderful poem! I think this is one of your very best! If not THE best! Loved it!
This is pretty powerful, egg shells, we all carry them, we all leave them, we all hate walking on them. Good job...
Exceptional. Painful. rated
Oh thank you my friends, for commenting & understanding.
LL2: i know you get this, thank you
Linda: Hoping those years of doding this are gone
Sparking: thank you..I know you understand
Charlie: Awareness, Acceptance, Action...I like that...I like that alot...Thank you.
Dr. Spud: yes, me too, I wish it were not so hard.
Zanelle: thank you for your kind words. Yes, I imagine they DO litter the landscape on days like today. Just had to get it out!
Scylla: thank you, sir. Yes, desire to wipe the slate!
dianaani: Ha, didn't think of it like that...but I AM the one that brought up Festivus, wasn't I??
Kate: thank you so much...see my PM.
Mrty's Husband: thank you for your kind words. I just read your post and am so glad you did not have this same kind of day.
Roger: thank you for your understanding. glad your 25 years is up. Maybe that's the magic number...I hope...
Scupper: Thank you. Your too kind.
Crunch. Ooh, yea. They have a very different sound than that of the snow, when it gets so cold it squeaks, doesn't it? Rrreek, reeeek.. I think you have to have a periphery, and learn to hear the one that scatters them, and react differently, not as before, and - just - blithely step around, by, or through. They should sweep up their own mess, not you.
PS -- Killer graphic. Kudus.
Songbird: Thank you. They should sweep up their own mess, not you.
I like that - I do!
We all do this, unfortunately. Sometimes it is easier to adapt, than confront. This is a masterpiece. Well captured. R
profound and oh so true.
Oh trilogy. We've all been there in some form or another. How well you expressed it. ~r
that last line, that's where we take a leap of faith and do it
Eggshells, landmines, same thing. Holidays are fraught with them both. Great message in the poem.. nicely done Tril.
wow. Perfect. Yes, as others have said, I did this for at least 26 years...perfect poem and description...perfect. rated highly.
You don't have to walk on eggshells here.
I wish I didn't understand this so totally. For so long I've thought of others and their eggshells, but lately my own seem to be surfacing from nudges I might not even have noticed before. As always, your words dare to touch truth and as they do, they allow us to hear them and let them in. Thinking of you.
I have felt the same way many, many times...
I've walked on my share. I don't need to do it anymore. A big relief!
Turn my back;

avoid the confrontation.

or keep on track;

defend my reputation

what will cause least disruption

in the end.?

Wow, can I identify with this. Beautifully done.
"On the spot/or not./depends." Wow! what a deal of sadness, of heart-pain, is expressed in those short lines. Part of me wants to say, walk all over the damn things; they're made to be broken and we're made to break them. Put that other part, the less courageous part, does its own little ballet around and among them. Fine poem; insistent in its honesty.
Well done. Worth thinking about and taking on many levels, so I wont comment on the first tow or three that come to mind. I expect there are many more to consider.
But if you allow me to add a piece of advice - (which is worth what you just paid me for it) - Wear shoes.
This finely-crafted poem describes the day-to-day lives of far too many. I have avoided the eggshells for the past 25 years by avoiding the relationships that create them. I'm told that's not good either. It works for me, though. Walking on eggshells is an unbearable state of being for me.

Lezlie
I most certainly identify with this! I'm sorry this is where you're at. I did it for 21 years (not quite the Purple Heart status of 25). It was 20 years too long. I'm so glad I swept mine up.
Damn fine writing here, Tril. I'm sorry to say that I relate to this so well, and so often. And I hate to see that so many of us do, hate that you write of it with such finesse - obviously born of much experience. Sad, sad, sad.
But you've expertly captured the way I feel today... so many days. Too many days.
Two things - thank you. And I'm sorry.
xoxo
Kim
I used to walk on eggshells every day. Not so much anymore, thank God. Great poem extremely well written. -R-
I know what you mean. Well done.
My goodness, I guess it makes me sad that so many can relate,
But so thankful for your kind, kind words. My poetry muse had left me for a while...I guess there's nothing like a little "emotion" to bring it back.
Thank you Kate
Dave..wow...thank you
Sheepdog, Joan, Vanessa: thank you for always being there and understanding.
Rita, yes, the holidays are fraught with them, aren't they?
Lea: That's why I LOVE it here!
Becky: Perfect? you are too, too sweet
anna1liese: thank you for your kind words. The great thing about this place - we can all be here for each other. And, as Lea said, don't have to walk on eggshells.
Patrick, Scanner, janice: thanks for your comments. glad you liked it.
You have to either sweep them away or try to develop tougher souls. Neither is easy. Wonderful writing, Trilogy. ♥
Perfectly, poetically stated. Wonderful poem.
rated with love
I totally relate to this, but could never have expressed the feelings so well.

Been there, done that and still doing it...
Like the imagry and the inward thoughts.
Trilogy in the end there is only one reasonable solution.
Throw in the onions which make you cry. The Ham that's always taking credit, the green "bell" peppers which only ring their own bells. Oh and don't forget the contents of the broken egg shells.
Stir'em up and make a great Western Omelet. It may give you a little indigestion, but this too will pass.
R
Jerry: thank you so much, your words are kind and honest. There's never time to plan, when those eggshells show up. Thats the problem.
Tim: I think that's the best advice I've had in years!!! ha..thanks.
Lezlie: glad you understand and relate, but sad too. sometimes you just can't avoid those relationships...so I guess it's "US" we have to work on.

jlynne: Nice to meet you. so glad yo swept yours up too. I'm working on it.
Sheba: thank you
Kim: I SO appreciated you comment.
Christine: Thank you. There's not many who can't relate. We're just all at different stages of sweeping, I guess.
Sophieh: Always god to see you here. Thanks
So beautifully expressed and poignant especially as I realized that it was me that my family was walking on eggshells around for so many years.. It makes me sad to wonder who you have been walking on eggshells for all these years that makes you so adept at them and want to hell to just sweep them up. As you have advised me so many times Tril., take care of yourself first and foremost.
Eggs, to be sure, must be handled gently and with great care, the leftover egg-shells, not so much.
Hi tril! Came back again to read and also to say CONGRATULATIONS on having this selected in the list of the finest on OS for 2010! So very well deserved my friend.

I told you it was one of your best!!!!
This explains that feeling so well. rated
Now that I see the date on this I understand how I missed it. I don't have too much experience walking on eggshells. I'm a little a more likely to walk on them and crush them all up but you relay it here and I understand because there was once upon a time. Nice work Trilogy.
This is a wonderful poem so happy you and it were recognized.
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us this year.
Congrats on having this wonderful poem selected as one of the 25 best on OS in 2010. I can relate to it on so many levels. Thanks you for sharing your gifts with all of us on OS. R.