Trudge164

Trudge164
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Arrive Alive!, Florida, USA
Birthday
February 29
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Noh-Won
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Sometimes serious, sometimes comical, always topical. =========================== A guy can dream and drown in a deluge of his own delusional thinking. Can't he? ========================= People have said this about me: "He was just one of those guys with that weird light around him. He just knew he wasn't gonna get so much as a scratch here." --Willard talking about Kilgore, "Apocalypse Now" =========================== It is what it is until it no longer is, then it becomes something else.

APRIL 10, 2010 8:21AM

A Sensuous Moment in 101 words

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From behind the counter, she asked me if I wanted a sample. It took me five seconds to realize she meant the pocket sandwich she had just baked. I took the bite-sized morsel of sourdough bread stuffed with ham and provolone cheese. As I chewed it, I looked her over and devoured her honey-spun blond hair, caramel-colored eyes, creamy complexion, and her slender body. I said it was delicious. She blushed. I ordered a café con leche. She told me to come back soon. I didn’t. It would have ruined that moment. It was the most sensuous meal I have ever had.

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" café con leche"? Hah. I hope that has caffeine in it. Great Work Trudge!
Thanks, Scanner. Of course it has caffine in it. It's a Cuban version of cafe au lait only it's super-charged with Cuban coffee for mucho, macho muchachos like me and you.
ho ho.

now THAT was HAWT. and I mean that right down to the tips of my little tootsies.
Hubba. And I so totally get that sentiment. The most sensual meal I ever had was brought to my lair by a spectacular tease. "Always leave 'em wanting more" are words to live by.
I think I met her in a Berlin coffee shop once.
Will you be my morning lech(e)?
All kinds of treats in that moment. Mmmmm.
Great piece..It is so important not to ruin a moment like that, something we learn, oftentimes the hard way.
Sometimes it's all about the moment._r
Scrumptious. Well done!
Blotting perspiration from my upper lip. Still fire in this furnace? Who wouldda thunkitt? ;0)
-rated-
Trudgeh, you are a gentleman and a ho. Well done! xox
(...still snickering at ladyslipper's remark...)

Nice capturing of the moment.
Nothing like sampling the merchandise.
She sounds way better than a potato chip. How could you only want one nibble?
You can tell I'm an old man - I was lusting over the sourdough with ham and provolone, not the blonde.
Whoah, that's hot, hot, hot.
It's so satisfying to savor those yummy moments. They don't happen often enough.. :)
Is it hot in here or is it just me? r
I am a Cafe con leche fan myself and going back probably would have ruined it. You'd got hitched ,the ring would have pinched and well you know...
hot pockets made with sourdough!?! yummmmm

wait...what were we talking about.oh yeah...hot!
I pictured it... got a tingle... good morning
foolish monkey, I'm glad it warmed your tootsies.

Jane Smithier Redux, eat your fill.

Denise Montgomery, it's all in the build-up.

Procopius, she did have an accent, but it was Wisonsin.

Ann Nichols, indeed!
Gary Justis, true these types of memoments are better preserved in memory by not acting on them

Joan H., agreed regardless how brief.

Natalie K Munden, yes and the cafe con leche wasn't bad either.

Ellen Cannon, fires of desire never burn out; they just need a little stoking.
Ladyslipper, I would but I'm taken.

Robin, more ho than gentleman. ; )

Consonants, it was like a polaroid

Edward Munster III, especially when it's FREE!

Geezerchick, it's better that way.

Cranky, I can relate.

Shop trade, it was much better than you nikes.

Xeononlit, the coffee too.

Brie, that's why I didn't go back so I could keep savoring them.

Sparking, ty

Cindy Ross, what's her screen name? Please visit my blog more often I needs the power-ratings.

Lorianne, yes the food was good too. ; )

Jane Awesome, morning tingles are the best.
Aunt Mabel, I didn't know you liked espresso so much. : 0
Ah cafe con leche . . . not to be confused with "coffee with a letch." Just kidding . . . I really like this.
LinintheSoutheast, the sandwich or the story? : )

XO9LOO93, hey spammy, ty for commenting three times, but did you rate?

Owl, no! You are right. I am a letcherer in my own mind.

Leon Freilich, I'm sorry, but I'm sworn to secrecy besides find your own sandwich shop girl. lol

Sweetfeet, I didn't know a sandwich could be so sexy. :::blushes:::

Tinkerertink69, you should have had seen the coffee.
ah, the stories we conjure with our minds. very, very tasty story, trudge.
a super-charged drink for a super-charged moment.
Wow, I am really blushing. So sad for her you did not go back. You might have been the one for her and she for you, unless you are already with someone else....and if this is just a story, you should be writing romance novels...Rated.
Femme Forte, very tasty indeed.

Cap'n, it was so super-charged that the hairs on arm burned when I held the cup.

Sheila, this was true. But I am taken. Thanks for the tip; I might just try my hand at writing a bodice ripper. Is Fabio still doing covers?
Just Cathy, it would have ruined the first. Remember! Everything in moderation.
look but don't touch... this was excruciatingly hot
Pavanne, it was so hot I had to use oven mitts when I wrote it.
Sexy stuff. Beautiful and romantic story. Musta been the cheese and provolone!
Scarlett, you have keen powers of observation. But you left out the cafe con leche.
Did you get that for here or to go...? Nice...
Up there with the dining scene in Tom Jones for sensual eating.
But with the sandwich, it would have been better to have a Materba. ;)
Cartouche, the memory was to go and it stayed with me. Ty
AtHomePilgrim, wow! Thanks, that is truly a compliment.
I remember seeing the movie version and that scene almost made me ... well... never mind.
AtHomePilgrim, I don't know, the cafe con leche gave it a unique clash of taste.
Oh, I get this...sometimes it's hard to think about food, isn't it? And I like that she blushed; it makes me like her and easy to see why you did, too.
Super writing!
Did you just make Hotpockets sexy? I think you did! (I'd double rate you for not hanging out to ogle and making a meal out of the samples. )
hmmmm good
salacious
perfect. some things stay perfect in memory.
Sounds as if this was in Miami. So many beauties here with "caramel-colored eyes." Must be tough for you guys.
Outside, thank you. It was an overall sensous experience.

Bellwether, I guess I did. I special that way.

Dianaani, don't forget to wipe your mouth. lol
Seafarer, that is why I didn't go back.

Lea Lane, she's an imported gringa from Wisconsin. Which floored me because I thought she was from the Carolinas.
Great piece. I agree. Sometimes a moment is all that's needed without follow up. :)
KDStorm, ty. Yes, moment can last forever.
yummy post Trudge. :-)
love it. this is quite the moment. I guess going back would have ruined it. rated!
PattyJane, ty and yes those hot pockets do taste good. : )

Caroline, sometimes it is better to pass on seconds.
So very wise of you not to stretch this moment into banality. These brief encounters with humanity happen to me frequently and I count each one sacred. Your descriptive language, however, should be stretched out into much longer piece of sensual prose. You do it do well. R
FrogTown Diva, thank you.