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MARCH 3, 2009 2:28PM

Going Meta: A Poem on Poetry, for FeatheredThing

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FeatheredThing wants poetry.

Marianne Moore

Poetry 

I, too, dislike it: there are things that are important beyond
all this fiddle.
Reading it, however, with a perfect contempt for it, one
discovers in
it after all, a place for the genuine.
Hands that can grasp, eyes
that can dilate, hair that can rise
if it must, these things are important not because a

high-sounding interpretation can be put upon them but because
they are
useful. When they become so derivative as to become
unintelligible,
the same thing may be said for all of us, that we
do not admire what
we cannot understand: the bat
holding on upside down or in quest of something to

eat, elephants pushing, a wild horse taking a roll, a tireless
wolf under
a tree, the immovable critic twitching his skin like a horse
that feels a flea, the base-
ball fan, the statistician--
nor is it valid
to discriminate against "business documents and

school-books"; all these phenomena are important. One must make
a distinction
however: when dragged into prominence by half poets, the
result is not poetry,
nor till the poets among us can be
"literalists of
the imagination"--above
insolence and triviality and can present

for inspection, "imaginary gardens with real toads in them,"
shall we have
it. In the meantime, if you demand on the one hand,
the raw material of poetry in
all its rawness and
that which is on the other hand
genuine, you are interested in poetry.

 

Source: Poets.org

From The Complete Poems of Marianne Moore. Copyright © 1961 Marianne Moore, © renewed 1989 by Lawrence E. Brinn and Louise Crane, executors of the Estate of Marianne Moore.

 

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ok, I'm feeling quite inferior now....

back to the drawing table.....
I can hardly be considered a poetry critic. So much of it leaves me behind. I can actually understand this one. The last few lines make poetry much more clear to me. Raw and genuine. I feel better now. Thanks VR.

PS. If we were talking motorcycle repair manuals, I'd have a better idea about how to respond.
I see what you did there.

And I like it.
Let say this about poetry...I can't do it. I can't do brain surgery, and you have to be really gifted to be effective at either.
Hey, I didn't do anything! I just remembered how much I like Marianne Moore's poetry! Even her poetry about not liking poetry.

Clever girl, that one was.
Sheepdog--yeah, I'm singularly unqualified for brain surgery, and my forays into poetry are best left in the binders they still languish in, from decades ago.
I was going to complement you on an anti-poem poem, 'til I got to the bottom.

Did you know Marianne Moore proposed the name "Utopian Turtletop" for the Ford Edsel, the ugliest car ever? Probably the best-paying gig she ever had.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marianne_Moore
Wow. This is really quite something. Thanks for the introduction to Marianne Moore.
Her poetry is so amazing. Thanks for this one.
this is rich, challenging, straight on stuff, a great choice

rated for meta
oh, I'm going to have to copy that one
One of my favorites.
These lines are great . . .

we
do not admire what
we cannot understand
I can't "do" the poetry thing, but I sure can enjoy it. I really enjoyed this. Thank.
thank you, thank you. And, in case I forget to mention it - Thank you!
yowza... that was a real work of verbal art. I stand in awe...
that poetry stuff is useful when yer young, i did one once and it worked a treat. but the maiden was perhaps uncritical...
What Michael said. I have a hard time with poetry, only a very few get through to me. This is one. Figures you'd find it for me. Thank you.
I have not read this Moore poem - I've heard the "imaginary gardens with real toads in them" line though . I think it's true of all good writing whatever the genre.
Moore can be so erudite...
This was great.. Very interesting.
Exactly what Marianne said.
Two clever girls, VR and Marianne. You both make me laugh and you both make me nod my head and murmur, "Yes, yes!"

It doesn't get any better than this...pass the beer.

Thanks, for posting and mentioning my post too. Yes, FeatheredThing wants Poetry!
"Imaginary gardens with real toads in them."

Now who can improve on that?
didn't know her work -- glad I do now! Thanks for the intro!
i'm a fan, happy to i.d. another