wakingupslowly

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wakingupslowly

wakingupslowly
Location
A city in, Iowa,
Birthday
June 17

MAY 21, 2009 11:17AM

Motorcycle

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the way her arms weren't wrapped around him

scared me at first

she wasn't clenching

not holding on for her own sweet and dear life

instead

her hands ran up and down his torso

her fingers sensing his muscles, his ribs

as he steered and impelled the motorcycle through traffic

her head on his back

her eyes closed 

 

I looked

and looked

then looked away 

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poem, poetry, motorcyle, woman, man, love, erotic

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I always ride with the back foor pegs down. (probably only the riders know what this means)

Very cool poem

rated
sorry, i meant "back foot pegs"
Lovely - really lovely. I don't even have a wise ass comment.
BTW - you had me at "impelled"
really nice image. Rated.
Thanks, John, Duane , and Charity for reading and commenting. I know I broke the haiku Thursday rules, but.... sometimes I break rules.

John, you may not be surprised to know that I have no idea what back foot pegs are. Do they make an impact on how the passenger sits? Surely not on what she does with her hands, right?

Duane, no wise ass words? What? It's titled "Motorcycle", doesn't that impel you to be a smart ass?

Thanks, Charity. I saw this image last night. Had to get it out of my head, and it came out in a poem. Funny that.
Sigh. This brings back good memories.
Cool, Odette, I'm glad. The woman I saw last night was definitely creating good memories.

I never had a motorcycle riding boyfriend... even though I wanted one.
you KNOW i like this one!
Thanks, Captain. It was interesting last night, he looked oblivious to what she was doing, but I doubt that he was.
This is excellent! I think it's about a boyfriend/girlfriend thing, but I also read it as a mother watching her daughter taking a ride with her boyfriend for maybe the first time and being unable to stop her from growing up.
Thanks, Michael. I love to hear what others read into my stuff. Other versions always welcome here.
Beautiful. You just keep amazing this reader.