wakingupslowly

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wakingupslowly

wakingupslowly
Location
A city in, Iowa,
Birthday
June 17

MAY 29, 2009 3:27PM

the small hours

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gargoyles guard and protect them

the small hours (one, two, three, and four)

assuring them intact and present

for release every night

 

hours vast as a cathedral

full of air and invisible holiness

(sit still and try to be blessed)

 

the darkness in them 

suffocates like sand, bearing down

on your eyes, your limbs 

(try breathing) 

lungs of cement 

 

such small hours, one, two, three, even four

 eek out their minutes,  the seconds heavy

weighted with the thick humidity of holy water 

 

dawn crawls in around the edges

weeping as she wins the fight for

one more morning 

 

 

 

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christ.

I hate this poem
I don't hate this poem.
I live this poem.
Well, MTN....that's a nice response. Truly. Thank you.

Lea, all I know is morning always comes. Even during those nights when I swear it never will, it does.
It is always darkest before dawn.

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I love this po em
Okay. It will all be...

okay.
Thanks for the read and the words, Robin, ladyfarmerjed, and Brian. Damn. I still loathe this poem... I've worked versions of it over the years and this is its most current form.

It may never be done.
hmmmmmmm, Duane. Just, hmmmmmm.
xo, Julie. welcome back.
i like it :) i both love and hate the small hours at times. definitely a difficult 'subject' to capture in words, tho you seem to do well at that!
Lovely, lyrical imagery.

"dawn crawls in around the edges

weeping as she wins the fight for

one more morning"
Very tastey poem. I'm not big on reading poems although I like to write them. I really enjoyed this one.
"hours vast as a cathedral

full of air and invisible holiness

(sit still and try to be blessed)"

Wow!
What an ending! Dawn crawls weeping . . .