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JULY 12, 2009 10:11AM

When A Poem Gets Stuck (Silly Sunday Morning Poem)

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 A stuck poem is never

a good thing for a poet. Sometimes they

sit in your wrists, clogged

somehow, jammed up and not written.  

(Those might be the wrists with carpal tunnel pain.)

 

We've all seen poets with poems

stuck on their shoulder, weighing

them down, forcing a bend or a hunch where

they should be upright. Shoulders carry a

poem for a lifetime in some cases, creating imbalance

and falls. I've seen those shoulders. (You have, too.)

 

Never let a poem get stuck in you heart, oh no, never

there. Making the heart beat wildly, or not all, a poem

stuck in the heart inflicts only mayhem, like an intersection

where the stop sign was stolen in the night. The poem

stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,

like a thousand-year mortgage. 

 

The loins. No, no, no. A poem

stuck there is second only to the one

in your heart. Dream it out, work it out, or

screw it out, but never let a poem fester there.

Those are the poems that turn you inside out, making

you silly and a wee bit crazed.

You may appear to others like you're riding the 

Ferris wheel and the Scrambler at the same time

at the State Fair.  

 

If your poem is stuck in your feet, you know

just what to do. Move them, don't soak.

Pound the pavement, scale the

mountain, walk the beach. It’ll come out

as a poem or in newly toned leg muscles, or maybe both.

 

If a poem must be stuck, wish it be

there in your fingertips. Burning and tingling,

reminding you that you have words, words, words

to tap out, to scratch onto the napkin, to write

in blue ink on your palm. Your fingertips, that's where

you want to find your poem each morning. 

 

 

 

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Poems stuck. Cool idea. So many do get stuck in those and other places you mention and so never see the page or screen.
I don't like when they get stuck but sometimes they do and then, i guess, one must deal with the effects.
Imprisoned thought in body part. You are Too Cool ! Happy to see the apoptosis complete. I think i feel your smile, new, pic new tude.
Patrick
I'm with timsored: cool idea.
I'm always glad when yours get unstuck!
What a fresh and unique view! I'd never thought of it that way. Love it! I'm thinking that you think outside the box. :)
Oh, but can't you all see those poems, those songs, those books, those inventions... all stuck somewhere in people? I swear I can actually SEE them. (Am I confessing too much?)

As to how I might know how a stuck poem makes its impact (because I know Grif will ask later) let's just say....I've lived a little. Unstuck a few, tamped down a few, walked out many.

Thanks all. You know I love it when you stop by.
I loved the heart stuck stanza best, though the shoulder one gave me images of the angel on one shoulder, demon on the other...

well done.
Big smile. So good.
Sort of poetry constipation!

Rated for perspective
I soooo hear this, though I'm not so much a poet. The body seems to hold onto or process what our brains/spirits don't. Or at least, that's how it seems to me. :~)
somehow this reminded me of Allan Sillitoe: poem stuck in the feet.
pome stuck in the heart was Bob Dylan.
I love this. Really. Now, how is it that you know that a stuck poem makes its impact?

((C)))
Last night I got jumped by a street tough poet parolees. And this morning I woke up in an alley with poems firmly jammed 'neath all my finger- & toenails. And anthologies in my heart & spleen. Doctor says I'll be coughing up syllables 'n' soul for another three weeks, at least.
I really like this. I had a poem stuck in me last night. I used to write funny poems all the time as a kid. (I was semi-famous in my family for this talent.) I had not written a poem on OS until yesterday but felt compelled to write it. It was not funny, but it was a release.
Way cool. Here I've been thinking all along that my poems got stuck in my head and it turns out they are usually stuck in my heart. Now that you lead me to where they reside, I should take your advice, post-haste...Thanks.
--rated--
I hate it when they get stuck. But so good when they get unstuck.
I get it! I love the imagery. I can't say I've ever had one (a stuck poem that is), but in some ways, poems sound a little like hormones to me (something I can better relate to ).

Love the poem constipation comment too :-)

Sorry, I am trying to be a good freind and read the poetry, and I Do enjoy it, I just don't ever know what to say about it gah!
Very clever writing.
You guys crack me up. I think....

Thanks for reading a silly poem conjured up on a quiet Sunday morning.

Brian, yes, I think that's a reasonable image.

Thanks, Duane. You ever have images that get stuck?

Buffy - that's a good one. You own that one.

Owl, yes, yes, yes. And I swear, they are visible sometimes.

Thanks, Rolling. I need to look up Sillitoe, and I will now.

Grif, we should talk sometime. I'm perhaps more lived than you think I am.

Pablo, ouch! I hope you recover soon. Sounds tough.

M B, you did. And then you wrote it, and it was lovely and aching. And I wish you well, peace, and rest.

Hi, Mothership. Get it out, woman. Write it. Sing it. Scream it. Whatever. Get it out of that damn heart.

Kelly.... thank you, sweetheart. Just keep reading. I soooo appreciate it. Comment when something speaks to you, and it if not... no harm done. I love your visits.

Thanks, T.S. 'Clever' works.

Thanks, Steve. I thought of you the other day when I read NY Times article on health reform. I thought, "Hey, I know a doc in Oklahoma!"
oops! hey, HB. Yes, unstuck is much better. And then, well-written is the best. Maybe the super-best, and a dream.
Oh, I loved this! You know what it reminded me of? Margaret Atwood's "Aging Female Poet" poems. For poets, it's like every experience has to turn into poetry! Everything-- from heart trouble to poetry trouble.

Oh! And you know what else it reminded me of? Garrison Keillor tells a story of how he wrote this one perfect story and then lost the briefcase it was in, and all the stories he's written since then have been attempts to recapture that one lost story.

"The poem

stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,

like a thousand-year mortgage."

Yeah.
The advice for stuck feet resonates for the rest of the piece--scale the mountain, indeed. . .
I'll be sure to take my fiber verbage every morning. Nicely done!
"The poem
stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,"

Loved that line - you definately write from the heart. Sincerely enjoyed you.

peece,
dj
Thanks, Jimenace. I think I love that line, too. And, Lordy, how I mean it.

Thanks for visiting.
I needed this last night as I tried to come up with a thursday poem. Oh well late again. I need to print this out and hang it near the computer.
Tijo, I should do that, too, print it out and refer to it. I get so stuck sometimes.

Thanks for the note.
Most likely the heart is where my poem is stuck. Are you recommending a bypass? Maybe just shoot me; I don't know if I can keep making payments on a 1000-year mortgage when the equity is under water.
Rich, no bypass, and no one's going to shoot you. Maybe though.... try writing the poem, or the song, or the essay, or the story. Whatever style works for you. Just, let it out.

xo