A stuck poem is never
a good thing for a poet. Sometimes they
sit in your wrists, clogged
somehow, jammed up and not written.
(Those might be the wrists with carpal tunnel pain.)
We've all seen poets with poems
stuck on their shoulder, weighing
them down, forcing a bend or a hunch where
they should be upright. Shoulders carry a
poem for a lifetime in some cases, creating imbalance
and falls. I've seen those shoulders. (You have, too.)
Never let a poem get stuck in you heart, oh no, never
there. Making the heart beat wildly, or not all, a poem
stuck in the heart inflicts only mayhem, like an intersection
where the stop sign was stolen in the night. The poem
stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,
like a thousand-year mortgage.
The loins. No, no, no. A poem
stuck there is second only to the one
in your heart. Dream it out, work it out, or
screw it out, but never let a poem fester there.
Those are the poems that turn you inside out, making
you silly and a wee bit crazed.
You may appear to others like you're riding the
Ferris wheel and the Scrambler at the same time
at the State Fair.
If your poem is stuck in your feet, you know
just what to do. Move them, don't soak.
Pound the pavement, scale the
mountain, walk the beach. It’ll come out
as a poem or in newly toned leg muscles, or maybe both.
If a poem must be stuck, wish it be
there in your fingertips. Burning and tingling,
reminding you that you have words, words, words
to tap out, to scratch onto the napkin, to write
in blue ink on your palm. Your fingertips, that's where
you want to find your poem each morning.


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Comments
I don't like when they get stuck but sometimes they do and then, i guess, one must deal with the effects.
Patrick
I'm always glad when yours get unstuck!
As to how I might know how a stuck poem makes its impact (because I know Grif will ask later) let's just say....I've lived a little. Unstuck a few, tamped down a few, walked out many.
Thanks all. You know I love it when you stop by.
well done.
Rated for perspective
pome stuck in the heart was Bob Dylan.
((C)))
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Love the poem constipation comment too :-)
Sorry, I am trying to be a good freind and read the poetry, and I Do enjoy it, I just don't ever know what to say about it gah!
Thanks for reading a silly poem conjured up on a quiet Sunday morning.
Brian, yes, I think that's a reasonable image.
Thanks, Duane. You ever have images that get stuck?
Buffy - that's a good one. You own that one.
Owl, yes, yes, yes. And I swear, they are visible sometimes.
Thanks, Rolling. I need to look up Sillitoe, and I will now.
Grif, we should talk sometime. I'm perhaps more lived than you think I am.
Pablo, ouch! I hope you recover soon. Sounds tough.
M B, you did. And then you wrote it, and it was lovely and aching. And I wish you well, peace, and rest.
Hi, Mothership. Get it out, woman. Write it. Sing it. Scream it. Whatever. Get it out of that damn heart.
Kelly.... thank you, sweetheart. Just keep reading. I soooo appreciate it. Comment when something speaks to you, and it if not... no harm done. I love your visits.
Thanks, T.S. 'Clever' works.
Thanks, Steve. I thought of you the other day when I read NY Times article on health reform. I thought, "Hey, I know a doc in Oklahoma!"
Oh! And you know what else it reminded me of? Garrison Keillor tells a story of how he wrote this one perfect story and then lost the briefcase it was in, and all the stories he's written since then have been attempts to recapture that one lost story.
"The poem
stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,
like a thousand-year mortgage."
Yeah.
stuck in your heart is the poem that owns you,"
Loved that line - you definately write from the heart. Sincerely enjoyed you.
peece,
dj
Thanks for visiting.
Thanks for the note.
xo