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SEPTEMBER 13, 2009 12:17AM

Making Love

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Toe to toe.

Ankles wrapped around

ankles.

 Twined.

Thighs on thighs, with

a little give

here

and then

there.

Hipbone to hipbone.

Just so.  A sublime

match.

Chest to chest.

(heart to heart)

Necks marbled around each other.

Lips giving up

lip to lip. 

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Oh yes...just like that!
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Mothership
September 13, 2009 12:23 AM
Wow - why give up now? This is hot.
Owl_Says_Who
September 13, 2009 12:28 AM
Ohhhh yes yes yes yes yes. And then she said yes yes yes yes.
mypsyche
September 13, 2009 12:28 AM
Thanks, all.

Off to bed, then. A sweet night to you.
wakingupslowly
September 13, 2009 12:55 AM
This is exquisite, and you got it just exactly right.
Stephen McGuire
September 13, 2009 01:05 AM
Yes, very evocative? If anyone reading this hasn't been there, I hope you experience it soon!
dragonlady
September 13, 2009 01:07 AM
"Necks marbled around each other." Now that's poetry! R
john blumenthal
September 13, 2009 01:39 AM
you know how to make me hungry...
Brian B
September 13, 2009 05:40 AM
Love the way you come up slowly. A nice angle on a nice thing.
Lea Lane
September 13, 2009 09:31 AM
I got a kink in my neck doing all these positions in my mind. ANd then I got a kink somewhere else. That's a good thing.
O'Really?
September 13, 2009 09:37 AM
Hot..wow!...just hot!
Walk Away
September 13, 2009 09:52 AM
Thanks for reading, everyone. I appreciate every one of you for clicking on a poem. (Though maybe I tricked you with the title!)
xo
wakingupslowly
September 13, 2009 01:16 PM
your words make me live good moments over again
blumondayz
September 13, 2009 01:21 PM
That's poetry, the way I like it. If only there were a way to make it so.
Duaneart
September 13, 2009 03:54 PM
beautiful poem. I was a little thrown by the double reference to lips at the end.
Adam Sifre
September 14, 2009 03:06 AM
Now where did I hide that vibrator................for the kink in my neck yea that's it the kink in my neck! Can you see me blushing? Great post!
Lunchlady 2
September 15, 2009 08:11 PM
Thanks again, all.

Adam - I'm still not sure about the ending, and I've been working on this poem for eight years. (for the love of...)

Lunchlady.... I thought the second drawer in the nightstand was the universal hiding place, no?
wakingupslowly
September 15, 2009 08:22 PM
Visual. Try it without the last line at all? Love your visual passion.
grif -
September 17, 2009 10:39 PM