wakingupslowly

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wakingupslowly

wakingupslowly
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A city in, Iowa,
Birthday
June 17

SEPTEMBER 19, 2009 11:13PM

I Didn't Walk by the Synagogue Today

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 I didn't walk by the synagogue today.  My

daily walk

edited. I knew the cars would fill the

surrounding

streets, emotion urging out of the

tall wooden doors. 

(You're inside, that I know, even if 510

miles away.)

I envy these holidays you keep. The offer of

celebration,

contemplation, atonement, and needed comfort

for your sorrow.

 

Rapt, I listened when you described the

prayers, the Torah,

casting off sin, and when, that first year

after you lost both parents,

the Rabbi touched your hand, coaxed your eyes

into his and said,

"You're a good son, still."

 

All the synagogues within forty miles sit

within a mile of

my house. I can't avoid this

reminiscence today, though I

try to place it in a new locket,

small and oval. As yet, untarnished.

 

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Sorry, all. I try to keep it to one poem a week at the most. Don't know what got into me today.

Thanks for your support.
That's very moving. Intense, too.

I love your words and what they capture for me. I love your still intensity, like a coiled serpent, full of unnameable power, yet watching with no other object than that.
Sometimes you just can't help it. Not walking by didn't seem to help. It seems as if your directness in writing is directly related to the constancy of your feelings/thoughts for him. Perhaps I read too much in here. xoxo
Your heart speaks through your words. When you share with us, you are sharing your heart. Thank you.
Thanks, you guys. (And you are all guys, so I can use that word easily.)

Stephen, you know I love when you read my stuff. Thank you.

Ray - so nice to have you here. Thank you, too.

Grif, no I can't help it, I guess. And yes, yes and no.

Brian, thanks. I didn't.

Rod, such a sweet and kind comment. Thank you, dearly.
I like it and don't mind at all that you write poems as many as you need to help sort out your thoughts! It's a good thing.
Thanks, lunchlady2. I couldn't help myself yesterday - two in one day!
two in one day happens when you are truly connected to your self. rejoice. do not apologise.
The spiritual aspect of love and longing weave throughout this piece. Beautiful.
Thanks, Rolling. I appreciate your take on this.

Owl - thank you, of course. I always feel good when you read and leave a note.

Thanks, Michael. Thanks much.
Beautiful words from a woman filled with beauty. Whatever it takes to find your way, always listening to a voice with heart!
Thanks, Patrick. I always appreciate your gentle, supportive comments.
You don't leave room for any smart-assed remarks, anyway, but anything else I might say will come off as patronizing or insincere. So, even though I read this days ago, I couldn't come up with an appropriate comment.

I do think you should keep writing these.
Rich, that you're here is more than I could ask for.

But, c'mon, you can be smart-assed whenever you feel like it. I know some of this is not that good and a little too... well... too personal for most people. So, go ahead and be a smart-ass. I can take it. xo