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Walk Away
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October 05
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The things I write may not change the world, but they might change me. *********************************** Writing is the only thing that, when I do it, I don't feel I should be doing something else. - Gloria Stienem ************************************

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OCTOBER 22, 2009 5:45PM

And so it is...

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And so it is
as we knew it would be
in just a matter of time
there’s no point now
in fighting the same small wars
though we both know we always will
just as we always have
it’s much easier to do than
admitting our failures and our shame
accepting our guilt and our blame
And giving in we
concede the ugly truth
of who we are, what we’ve become
angry children tossing words instead of rocks
breaking spirits, shattering dreams
loathe to accept the blame
pointing dirty fingers rather than
admitting our failures and
accepting defeat in our foolish game
And so it is
as we knew it would be
and finally admit at last
while we carelessly toss away
every dream we held together, every promise
never meant to be
it’s so much easier to do than
admitting our failures and our shame
accepting our guilt and our blame
     

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A powerful story told within these words and, unfortunately one many of us has lived out in our past.

Rated.
That should have been on the Statue of Liberty. Not sure Emma Lazarus is relevant today.
R
Incredibly Powerful! (Rated).
Too true, in too many contexts . . . You have a gift for putting such powerful emotion (including the whirlwind of confusion) into clear, heartfelt words. ((((Walk Away)))).
Powerful. Aching. Takes me back to a time that was.
Life can be very complimented, especially among friends. Great, as usual!
R~
Beautiful description of an unnecessary life experience.

Rated.
So much easier. My own shame has taken me years to admit.
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

That is so hard.... there has to be a way between this and coasting... I guess its the admitting and accepting, right? Right. Just like you already said.

Much love, dear.
Again, you are all so generous with your kindness.
Thank you.
So much depth in the shape of poetry. Heartbreaking, perfect.
Rated.
Marcela
That was really moving....thanks for sharing.
failures and shame, guilt and blame.....ouch. You got this so right.
Oh, hun. You didn't fail to try. Sometimes you must simply Walk Away in order to be Happy. I hope love's beauty embraces you again soon, doll.
I thank you for your comments and sweet PMs. I'm not fine but I will be. Really. Sometimes things just are harder than I'd like them to be.
Beautiful, very touching...I loved it.
Wow - I felt every word. In my heart. I know this story so well.