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Wayne Gallant

Wayne Gallant
Location
Morriston, Florida,
Birthday
April 09
Title
Grand Vizier
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I am six feet two inches of rippling muscle, wavy blond hair, sparkling wit and two-fisted defense of Family Values and the American way of life. (I did say that I write fantasy fiction, didn't I?) Addendum for the benefit of the humorless and/or brain-dead - The above was meant to be satirical. The parenthetical (that's the part between the curved vertical lines) should have alerted you to that intent.

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APRIL 9, 2009 2:37PM

Torch Song - flash fiction

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fiery

I was watching the house through the spotter scope when the garage suddenly burst into flame like some gigantic firework, a great yellow-orange ball, growing swiftly. It reminded me of films I'd seen of the atom bomb tests. I shuddered, and held my breath for several seconds before releasing the scope from it's tripod, returning it to its case, and placing it back in the little shed where I kept the supplies for my rooftop garden.

I walked down the two flights of steps to my office and waited for the phone to ring.

After an hour, the phone still hadn't rung, and I started to worry that something had gone wrong. But nothing could go wrong, I had planned this perfectly.

The Oxy-Acetylene torch had been bought six months before, when I enrolled in a welding class at the community college. It sat in my half of the two-car garage, next to the metal frames I was building to hold my planters. The potting table was covered with garlic bulbs and onion sets. No one could have detected the faint garlic smell of leaking acetylene gas.

This morning I had kissed Janice goodbye as she lay in bed, still not fully roused from sleep. Her mouth tasted stale.

"I'm off. See ya this evening."

"Umm. Bye sweety."

"You go back to sleep now. The alarm's set for eleven."

"Uh huh. Bye."

In the garage, I put on my cotton garden gloves, opened the driver's side door of Janice's car, and pulled the hood release. I raised the hood and propped it on the rod. The spark plug wires were snuggled close beneath the exhaust manifold, but I had no trouble removing the ignition wire from the first one, and placing it back to within a fraction of an inch of the spark plug terminal. Lowering the hood carefully, I listened for any sound from within the house. Nothing.

After making sure that the tank valve was closed, I used a pipe wrench to remove the line valve from the acetylene cylinder, and replaced it with the one I had prepared specially. The one with the large crack along the threads. I opened the tank valve and could hear a faint hiss and taste a hint of garlic.

I took off the gloves and left them on the potting table, then went out the side door, being careful to see that it was tightly closed. A five minute drive took me to the office building.

At the office, I made a few business calls, then at ten thirty interviewed a young woman about a position as a secretary. I made sure the interview lasted until well past eleven thirty. At ten before noon, I went up to the roof.

Janice was a creature of habit, so I expected that she would leave for her afternoon job at precisely twelve. She didn't dissappoint me.

At one thirty, two men entered my office, one a policeman in uniform, the other a middled aged man in rumpled plain clothes.

"You Asa Johnstone?" plain clothes asked.

 

torch

 

 

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This has been up for nearly three hours with nary a read or comment!!??!

Time for a bump.
I'm sorry to be reading this so late. I enjoyed the tone ... and flash fiction is really catching on. The problem for a writer, here on OS, to find an audience is major. We need popular tags on OS front page. Why do they still have tags linking to categories concerning Palin, McCain etc? --rated--
Nicely done, Wayne.

I would echo 3M's comment. The feed is a bitch - maybe what we need is a commonly-agreed-upon set of tags to use so content is even easier to find.

Thumbed.
Thanx Mean (hope you don't live in a jar.)
Bill, thanx for commenting.

The fact that this has been up for over 24 hours, and drawn only two comments and an equal number of ratings, proves my point that OS is certainly NOT a "writers' blogsite", protestations to the contrary notwithstanding.

Most readers here don't give a rat's ass about creative writing, instead preferring to blog about TV shows, what Obama is doing, Billy Bob Thornton, etc.
um, I just found this today.

Or I'd have written about it sooner.

I loved it. I wish I could've read more of it.

Goodbye, Wayne.
Thanx, Connie. I don't plan to take this one any further.

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