zanelle

zanelle
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Alpine, California, United States
Birthday
December 07
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I am here in cyberspace trying to understand the true nature of reality. My artwork can be seen in the blog link below. My 'Sex and Love' articles can be seen on Hayley's Comments http://hayleyscomments.com/

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FEBRUARY 23, 2012 8:41AM

Photos from the Freeway

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                            In back a line of headlights stretching to the coast.

                            In front a row of tail lights heading into the hills.

                            A typical evening commute in Southern California,

                            I'm thinking of you and how busy you are.

 

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                          Too busy to call or write.  Are you in the car next to me?

                          Are we traveling alongside each other but isolated

                           In our metal bubbles hurtling through space?

                           Can't you make the time to send one little note?

 

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                       Hurling along the road.   Just another commute.

                       On Valentine Day there were several bad accicents.

                       Maybe people just got mad and stepped on the gas.

                       Trying to escape the silence of hearts alone or hurt.

 

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                 Space aliens among us, spirits guiding our journey,

                Are you there my friend?  Send me a sign.

                 In this modern world how do they find us?

                 The chances for love are hidden on these night rides.

 

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                    Too many love songs on the radio

                    So many emotions inside our journeys.

                    Better to just keep in one lane and do the trip.

                    Enjoying the sunset behind and the hope of home.

 

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                            Rounding the bend and heading down

                            Onto the country road and the quiet.

                            Gas prices make this ride very precious

                             No email waiting for me.   Fading to black.

 

 

 

 

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You're so creative! Thanks for the ride in California!
You never cease to amaze me Z. A simple car ride you turn into art, with a great poem to go with it~
This was art no doubt about it.
HUGGGGGGGGGGGG
Longing for a note, a call, an e-mail- 2012. Isolation while surrounded by millions. I like this, a lot z
No email...been there done that... I have to wonder if the isolation is the phenomenon of the culture or the geography of So Cal... to visit my best friend I'd have to drive 250 miles round trip.

JMac
Very well done
I can relate
~R~
You've made the commute seem like a lonely ride in a spaceship, far away from earth. I love the photos and poem. Sharing to FB!
A very nice ride indeed.
This was brilliant and atmospheric at the end. Very original, so EP EP! and hugggs.
I hope Ponch and John don't see this post...
I can feel the isolation of people driving home alone.
Two things struck me. FRed(tm) was orf Invading Poland.

1./ They drive a lot slower than in the UK and esp Europe.

2./ Everyone is on the wrong side of the road.

We - both FRed(tm) and I - prefer to fly. Less traffic.
Terrific soliloquy with the car as a metaphor of our isolated perceptions and life as the "night ride". So many great lines. "...the silence of hearts alone.." is only 1.
Hot shots too!
R+
Lovely commentary on our times, Zanelle. How were you ever able to get all those pictures?