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&lt;p&gt;PEW just released a new study about political behavior on social networks.[1] Conservative outlets have quickly proclaimed, &amp;ldquo;Liberals are less tolerant of different opinions than conservatives.&amp;rdquo;  The more virulent right-wingers go so far as to say, &amp;ldquo;Liberals are less tolerant than normal people&amp;rdquo; (Investors Business Daily), and similar hyperbole. These declarations may attract viewers, but they are also erroneous. That is not what the PEW research says.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt; A few points about this from a sociological perspective: &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;   1. The PEW study did not measure, or even &lt;em&gt;attempt&lt;/em&gt; to measure, the level of &amp;ldquo;tolerance&amp;rdquo; of its sample population. What it measured was an action, not an attitude. That action was whether or not people  distanced themselves from another person online because of issues relating to political content.[2]  Reducing the PEW report to a judgment on levels of liberal &amp;ldquo;tolerance&amp;rdquo; is a conflation and misreading of the survey results. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;  2. Overlooked in this hasty reframing of a survey result is another result from the same report: more liberals than conservatives self-censor their posts in order not to offend others.   &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;3. This is a reflection of another behavior that has been well-documented about liberals, which is: liberals tend to be more averse to conflict than conservatives are. Although this approach is often mocked by conservatives, liberals as a group broadly tend to share the attitude, &amp;ldquo;Can't we all just get along?&amp;rdquo; It is one reason why liberals are more likely than conservatives to work towards compromise and consensus decision making, given the choice between that modality and alternatives that would favor just their own interests.[3] &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt; 4. Related to these dynamics, from what I have seen of analysis of online political posting (particularly in the realm of comments and informal chat), there is a larger percentage of hostile statements made in conservative political screeds, than in liberal.  Conservatives are more likely to use negative words, derogatory statements and ad hominem attacks than are liberals on the internet. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;   The self-censoring measurement from PEW reflects the fact that liberals, motivated by a reluctance to engage in hostile discourse, or to provoke it, are more likely to edit what they say online.  It seems they are also more likely to edit what they engage with conversationally.  Other studies have also touched on liberal distaste for and avoidance of hostile attacks and provocateurs in political debate. This is not to say that liberals can't also behave in this manner, but rather, it seems the case that more liberals than conservatives are put off by such conduct and engage &lt;em&gt;&lt;strong&gt;less readily&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/em&gt; in conversations where this is normative. Liberals as a group place high value on cooperation, not doing harm in interactions, and achieving agreement. (For more on the liberal valuation of care over harm, which is a core value they prize more highly than do conservatives, see research notes at http://www.moralfoundations.org. See also the comments at footnote #3, which touch on some of this underlying value foundation in an analysis of Occupy Wallstreet, and an analysis of elements in political reasoning.)   &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;These underlying attitudes are in keeping with what else is known about liberal political discourse psychology and behavior, and could account for &lt;em&gt;&lt;strong&gt;why&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/em&gt; liberals more often hide, unfriend, or conceal opinions they &amp;ldquo;disagree&amp;rdquo; with on social networks online. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;  What the PEW study unfortunately did not ask, and what is central to this question, is, &amp;ldquo;are you blocking/unfriending people solely because their opinions differ from yours (regardless of how they are expressed), or are you removing them because they are presenting oppositional opinion in an inflammatory manner that fosters uncivil discourse?&amp;rdquo; &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;   Clearly, there is a vast difference between &amp;ldquo;intolerance of differing opinions&amp;rdquo; and &amp;ldquo;unwillingness to engage in hostile or emotionally stressful discourse.&amp;rdquo; &lt;u&gt;Neither&lt;/u&gt; of these qualities is measured by the PEW survey.  However, given the factors mentioned above, it appears to me that liberals are not less tolerant of &lt;strong&gt;differences of opinion&lt;/strong&gt;;  they are&lt;em&gt;&lt;strong&gt; less tolerant of rude and hostile snark&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/em&gt; in the name of political expression.   &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I want to see the PEW study that investigates &lt;em&gt;that&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;_____  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;1 &lt;a href="http://www.pewinternet.org/Reports/2012/Social-networking-and-politics/Main-findings/Social-networking-sites-and-politics.aspx"&gt;PEW Social Networking Sites and Politics report&lt;/a&gt;, March 2012. It is also worth noting the larger context here:  that only 18% of all social media users dumped or shunned someone because of their political disagreements. The majority of these did not have deep connections to the user they  dropped.  Most online users of any political stripe do not distance themselves from other posters on the basis of political content.   &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;2 More specifically, in the words of the survey, &amp;ldquo;Have you ever blocked, unfriended, or hidden someone on a SNS (social networking service) because they...? - posted something you disagreed with; posted too frequently about politics; disagreed with something you posted; argued about political issues; posted something that you worried would offend.  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;3.  Haidt, Jonathan. &lt;a href="http://reason.com/archives/2011/10/20/the-moral-foundations-of-occup"&gt;The Moral Foundation of Occupy Wall Street: an illustrated  guide to the signs at Zuccotti Park&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;em&gt;Reason&lt;/em&gt;, Oct 20, 2011.&amp;nbsp; &amp;ldquo;My colleagues and I find that liberals score higher than conservatives and libertarians on all measures of compassion and empathy. Liberals are more 'soft-hearted'...&amp;rdquo;&amp;nbsp;  Other studies in political science and social psychology have explored how this compassion orientation colors public discourse and willingness (or not) to engage in contentious debate about issues.    For a discussion of this attitude in its broader political framework, see F.M. Frohock, &amp;ldquo;An Alternative Model of Political Reasoning&amp;rdquo; in &lt;em&gt;Ethical Theory and Moral Practice&lt;/em&gt;, 9(1), 2006, pp 27-64. He characterizes the liberal mindset thus: &amp;ldquo;The primary instrument of dispute management in political liberalism is a form of political thinking and talking that tries to reconcile opposed positions with an impartial settlement based on fair arrangements and mutual respect, one that is careful to treat rival views equitably, and reasoned through from start to finish with open methods that lead to a public justification understandable to the disputants.&amp;rdquo; &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt; Other research on small group dynamics and political opinion in online conversations echo this essentially liberal orientation towards political discourse when it is scaled down to personal communications. One pundit characterized this flippantly as, &amp;ldquo;liberals want everyone to come to agreement; conservatives want it to be recognized that they're right.&amp;rdquo;  Although that is skewed pop psychology, there is some underlying truth to the dynamics referenced. I wonder if this is not at the heart of the tendency towards conservative attack dog behavior in the online political arena, and liberal reluctance to engage with that level of &amp;ldquo;dialog&amp;rdquo; (and taking umbrage that such a level of discourse is initiated in the first place.) Which, again, would account for the  disengagement reported by PEW.  &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&amp;nbsp;Note:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;I usually write about creative and non-political things &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com"&gt;at my blog&lt;/a&gt;, and I have an exceedingly low tolerance for political discussion of any stripe right now at all (be it ever so well mannered), so I may in fact not follow up on comments to this post. Please pardon me if I do not. My brain is mostly elsewhere in the middle of a fiction writing project, but the sociologist in me insisted on a bit of a venting about this PEW report. &lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;p&gt;Writers in today&amp;rsquo;s new media marketplace are sallying forth and  self-publishing a lot of their material. Some are asking what pricing is  best and what level of sales is needed in order to make a living at  writing. This is an exercise every writer goes through at some point, if  that writer is doing it for real income, not merely as a hobby. Here  are some thoughts about pricing and income in the current ebook  publishing marketplace, with a focus on short fiction. This is not a  rigorous treatment of the subject, but some thoughts spurred by &lt;a href="http://blog.deannaknippling.com/?p=3963"&gt;a blog post by DeAnna Knippling&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;img id="cid_1920946" src="/files/money-books-236x3001328182576.png" alt="money and books" hspace="5px" width="285"&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;h3&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Price Point&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/h3&gt; &lt;p&gt;The pricing of fiction is an arcane art. There is not much science to  it yet. What works? Often you won&amp;rsquo;t know until you try it and test it,  keeping good records of sales so you can see how book page copy and  varying prices work in combination to improve sales.&amp;nbsp; Non-fiction  publishers know this, and many indie authors and small publishers are  experimenting in exactly this manner to find the sweet spot in ebook  pricing in their non-fiction niche.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;But fiction writers? Not so much.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;As a case in point, let&amp;rsquo;s consider short stories. Famously (or  infamously), there are now scads of short stories being sold for .99 at  Amazon, a virtual glut on the market that has both sparked hope in the  rebirth of the short form story, and despair that so much cheap schlock  is finding its way into print that the really good stuff is impossible  to winnow out of the haystack.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;This rush to the 99 cent price point has produced a &amp;lsquo;default&amp;rsquo;&amp;nbsp;  low-ball price tag for short stories.&amp;nbsp; Is this a fair price for a short?  Maybe so, especially if it is, erm, short (rather than a longer piece  of short fiction)&amp;nbsp; or of only average quality.&amp;nbsp; Then again, for authors  who write better quality fiction, to sell at this price point may be a  real undervaluation of the work.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;There is a constant tension between pricing low and selling in  volume, versus pricing high, selling fewer but netting much more return  on those units sold.&amp;nbsp; Will .99 guarantee your books will sell well? Or  will a higher price attract a different kind of buyer, and help put more  money in the writer&amp;rsquo;s pocket?&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;The fact is that in outlets like Amazon, the writer can set whatever  price she wants to charge for a work, within certain limits. For the  sake of illustration here, let&amp;rsquo;s consider an &amp;ldquo;expensive&amp;rdquo; short story  priced at $2.99, as used in my friend&amp;rsquo;s number-crunching examples.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;While you the author may not be willing to pay more than 99 cents for  a short story, the fact is that many people are.&amp;nbsp; The reasons for this  are important.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;First, a higher price signals quality. People don&amp;rsquo;t always want a  bargain; they are often very willing to pay a premium where they  perceive value is to be had.&amp;nbsp; Second, in a market where there is a race  to the bottom to undercut a competitor&amp;rsquo;s price (and I&amp;rsquo;d argue that&amp;rsquo;s  been going on in ebook pricing), it is very easy to loose sight of the  value factor.&amp;nbsp; But remember: people don&amp;rsquo;t buy books on price alone. They  buy them for the escape and entertainment they offer. If you tell a  better tale, you have made your book worth more than alternatives out  there, and you can ask a higher price because you are delivering more  bang for the buck.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;It&amp;rsquo;s easier to do this if you have a track record or a following, of  course. Even so, many buyers are surprisingly willing to simply take you  at your word. For instance, in a sea of 99 cent stories, don&amp;rsquo;t you look  twice at the one that charges $2.99? What&amp;rsquo;s so special about that one?  Why&amp;rsquo;s it worth more?&amp;nbsp; At the very least these questions cause a buyer to  look more closely at the work in question. You&amp;rsquo;d have to sell six short  stories at the lower price to make the same royalty you&amp;rsquo;d clear from  selling one of the more expensive stories.&amp;nbsp; Financially this should be a  no-brainer.&amp;nbsp; Are you ripping off the buyer? Not at all. If they value  your work, then it has higher value. It&amp;rsquo;s that simple.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/think/sales-and-income-in-ebook-publishing/attachment/increasing-sales/"&gt;&lt;img src="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/increasing-sales-300x246.png" alt="increasing sales 300x246 Improving Sales and Income in Ebook Publishing" width="300" height="246"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;In the immortal words of Don (&amp;ldquo;American Pie&amp;rdquo;) McLean, &amp;ldquo;The more you pay, the more it&amp;rsquo;s worth.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;So take the plunge and eliminate the guesswork in all this. Offer a  story at a higher price point, and see how it goes. Of course, if your  storytelling is poor or mediocre in quality, you are taking a big risk  that scathing reviews will warn people off from your work, so I wouldn&amp;rsquo;t  recommend this for people starting out or who lack professional-quality  editing in their work.&amp;nbsp; But as for testing a price point? It&amp;rsquo;s that  simple.&amp;nbsp; Try a higher price tag in the market. You might be surprised at  the results.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;h3&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Units (Quantity) Sold&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/h3&gt; &lt;p&gt;So far people have been selling ebooks essentially the same way they  sell paper books. Publish, offer review copies, try to get some  attention for it through book reviews and blog posts, do things like  virtual book tours or podcast readings,&amp;nbsp; hope word of mouth helps it  catch on. Occasionally some investment in advertising to help showcase  the book. Even so, things like short stories are likely to trickle, not  fly, from the virtual bookshelves.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;It is my belief that internet marketing tactics can be used to  effectively pump up sales volume for fiction (of any sort) in the  internet marketplace. I don&amp;rsquo;t mean banner ads and such; I mean targeted  sales campaigns that recruit and sell to an audience that likes your  work. This is a potentially complex subject, and rather beyond the scope  of this particular post, but my point is simply that there may be ways  to amplify sales that are not being practiced by the majority of the  bookselling market right now, and which would help your work find its  proper (appreciative, money-paying) audience.&amp;nbsp; I hope to be able to post  more about this kind of alternative approach in the near future.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;h3&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Creating a Body of Work&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/h3&gt; &lt;p&gt;They may offer a low return on the dollar, but here&amp;rsquo;s one good reason  to continue writing short stories: when you have more content on line,  you are creating a pool of &amp;ldquo;related reading&amp;rdquo; for people who come across  your work. They like one story, they browse and buy two others.&amp;nbsp; If you  have a pool of work available you are creating a self-amplifying sales  tool.&amp;nbsp; It&amp;rsquo;s also true that the return would be higher if these were  books, not short stories, that you had a growing collection of, but  short stories are quicker to write and so lend themselves to this  &amp;ldquo;library building&amp;rdquo; function more readily.&amp;nbsp; One way to work shorts to  your advantage is to create short stories that elaborate on aspects of  your novels: telling prequel tales, side stories, back stories, tales  about locations or characters or legends that you didn&amp;rsquo;t have room to  properly incorporate into your novel. This way fans of the book can get  another dose of your fictional world and satisfy their craving for more  while you are off working on that next book.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;So, there you have it.&amp;nbsp; I know this just scratches the surface, but  those are my observations du jour about selling fiction in today&amp;rsquo;s ebook  marketplace. Hopefully these ideas will help writers who are serious  about making money off of their work. Do you have other tactics for  improving sales and income in short story or novel e-publishing?&amp;nbsp; Please  leave a comment below.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;This post originally appeared at &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com"&gt;Notes From the Lizard Lair&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;p&gt; &lt;img id="cid_1878979" src="/files/destiny-sgu11324915595.jpg" alt="Destiny-sgu1" hspace="5px" width="285" align="right"&gt;  I recently finished watching the whole two-year, 40-episode run of &lt;a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stargate_Universe"&gt;&lt;em&gt;Stargate Universe&lt;/em&gt; (SGU)&lt;/a&gt;,  which aired on TV from 2009-2010. I confess I am having a strange  relationship with this setting and story arc. It is haunting me. That is  the only word for it.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;There is a peculiar flavor to this show,  one I don&amp;rsquo;t think has been captured by any other science fiction I have  ever viewed. It manages to engage with its realism and drama regardless  of the arguably fantastic setting. (Once you agree to the premise of  ancient alien technology, all else follows from that, and that premise  is well established both in SGU and in the larger &lt;em&gt;Stargate&lt;/em&gt;  franchise). It challenges one to actually contemplate the size of the  universe, humanity&amp;rsquo;s inconsequential position in it, and the nature of  faith, science, technology and reality.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The show dances on the edge of  the un/explainable, even venturing now and then into the mystical, in  the sense that an event a character cannot explain remains opaque to  viewers as well. Yet this is managed in a way that comes off as luminal  rather than simply mystifying. The result is not so much a sense of  frustration as a realization that there are some things that are beyond  our understanding and just can&amp;rsquo;t be explained. We the viewers must  reconcile ourselves to that reality just as the crew must. And yet such  grand questions are explored in an intensely personal manner. SGU is a  close-focused microcosm of the ship-voyage crucible, successfully  blending wonder, science and the nearly mystical unknown in sincerely  moving drama.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/media/stargate-universe-review/"&gt;Read the full review here&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;div&gt;         &lt;p&gt;&amp;ldquo;&lt;strong&gt;Halloween&amp;rdquo; in Qua-lun: The Day of Return&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;In my novel &lt;em&gt;Dragonsword&lt;/em&gt;, an Asian-inspired heroic samurai  adventure, there is a holiday called The Day of Return. This day marks  the fall equinox and the turning of the seasons. At this time the veil  between worlds is thin, and ghosts and other disincarnate entities may  come through to visit the land of the living.  The day itself is loosely  analogous to our All Saint's Day or Dia de los Muertos, and the night  before &amp;ndash; the Night of Return &amp;ndash; could be likened to Halloween.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;In the land of Qua-lun, however, ghosts are very real.  This is a  time of year when the favor of departed spirits is curried, and  reasonable people are on guard against the predations of unhappy  spirits.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;As our own Halloween approaches, I thought it would be fun to share  this Qualuni version of a ghost story told during this holiday season.   &amp;ldquo;Li-Wan's Revenge&amp;rdquo; appears in the book &lt;em&gt;Dragonsword&lt;/em&gt;, where this  tale is told by a wizard to a group of children on the occasion of the  Day of Return festival.  If you'd like to sample more of this world, you  can download a copy of the fantasy novel for free at &lt;a href="http://www.dragonsword.info/"&gt;www.dragonsword.info&lt;/a&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="center"&gt; &lt;img id="cid_1662503" src="/files/exorcism_frontispiece1319852036.jpg" alt="Exorcism frontispiece" hspace="5px" width="285"&gt;&amp;nbsp;  &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Li-Wan's Revenge&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;A young woman named Li-Wan was the daughter of a good family in a  small village. She was light of mind and heart, for nothing in this  world was a burden to her. When her parents informed her she was to  marry, she was glad and wanted to ask her ancestors' blessings. But  first, she decided to adorn the ancestor shrine with peonies plucked at a  nearby stream.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Although she took an untraveled path through meadows, a strange  person caught up with the girl along the way. He was short, with beady,  gleaming black eyes and took curious darting steps as he fidgeted with  his hands. Li-Wan thought he was a peddler by the pack on his back and  cudgel that he carried. But she had never paid attention during her  studies, and didn't notice all the tell-tale signs: the little man was a  hengeyokai, a shape-shifter whose natural form was that of a rat. By  this she would have known that his intentions could only be evil. But  Li-Wan was ignorant, and spoke kindly to him as they traveled.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;He offered to help her pick flowers. Sadly for her, she agreed, and  by the riverbank the rat-person abused her then killed her. When her  body was found there was no clue to the identity of her killer, and  there were no local wizards or monks skilled enough to learn the tale  from the plants and stones that witnessed the event. Her death went  unavenged.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;The rat hengeyokai, who went by the human name Ruoi, journeyed on to  Li-Wan's village. He laughed to himself when her funeral procession  passed by, and noted the fineness of her parents' clothes when they  walked past. "One day I'll rob them," Ruoi promised himself. Soon he  opened a sake shop, which quickly became a gathering place for yakuza -  thugs and organized thieves who extorted protection money from villagers  and ran gambling dens. Honest villagers avoided it.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Meanwhile, in the house of Li-Wan's parents, those good people set up  offerings to the ghost of their murdered daughter. Her first spirit,  the animus, had been laid to rest with the funeral, and the third  spirit, her soul, was already bound for rebirth on the Wheel of Life in  heaven. But they feared her second spirit, the ancestral personality,  would be restless, and that might cause great danger for the living.  They tried to entice Li-Wan to the ancestor shrine and bind her ghost  there, but their offerings remained untouched, and the spirit chime  never rang in response to their pleas. They knew they had failed and  then they were afraid, for a murdered girl often comes back as a kuei,  an angry ghost seeking revenge.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;As they feared, the serving girl suddenly collapsed. They carried her  to her bed, where she tossed and turned, and cried out in a strange  voice. Clearly, a spirit had possessed her and was trying to use the  girl's resisting body to speak.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Li-Wan's parents called a priest from the temple. He came and  immediately began an exorcism. He burned incense and chanted all night.  He filled little smudgepots with herbs and, setting them alight, placed  them on the energy points of the servant's body, at wrists and chest and  belly. As the girl's skin heated beneath the smudgepots, the balance of  her vital energies changed. A wail was heard and with a single great  convulsion, the kuei was driven forth from her body.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Well! That satisfied Li-Wan's parents, but the ghost of the girl was  even more distressed. She had only tried to speak through the servants'  body to tell her parents the name of her murderer, and that he was now  living in their village. If the priest had thought to bring a medium  with him, that woman could have channeled the voice of the vengeful  ghost, and shared her knowledge. But the hasty work of the exorcist  prevented Li-Wan from telling that news. The ghost was not yet to have  her rest.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;So the murdered girl drifted through the village to Ruoi's sake shop.  There, yakuza thugs drank heavily and laughed over their dice games.  Then an idea came to Li-Wan. The kuei lay in wait out back by the privy,  and when one of the drunken thugs came to relieve himself, the ghost  possessed him. Because he was drunk, it was remarkably easy to take  possession of his body. Soon, Li-Wan looked down at herself from within  the husk she controlled. She now had a large muscular body, one that was  trained to kill with its hands. The kuei smiled and headed back to the  sake house.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;The yakuza she possessed went by the name of Koichiro. He had been  losing heavily at dice, and Li-Wan knew that if she went back inside and  quit playing, no questions would be asked. She did so; to a chorus of  disappointed voices and razzing insults, Koichiro shook his head and  refused to rejoin his companions at dice.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Instead, he walked over to the sake barrel where Ruoi sat, dipping  out servings of rice wine and putting them to heat over the brazier. The  other yakuza were soon rolling their dice, swilling their drinks, and  bantering raucously. They didn't notice Koichiro pick Ruoi up by the  neck, and plunge the rat-person head first into his barrel of wine.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;The evil little man struggled to get free. He changed his shape to  half-rat, half man, then went all the way to rat. But the thug's grip  never loosened. When he quit kicking, Koichiro got up and went out into  the night.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;There, the kuei released her victim, and the yakuza was once more in  control of his body. Followed by the curious ghost, the thug rejoined  his friends and tried to sit in again on the dice game, but now they had  no room for him. Disappointed, he ordered another drink. Hearing no  answer, he looked for Ruoi. He didn't see the man, but at the sake  barrel, he found something disgusting floating in the wine.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;'Ugh!' he fished a drowned rat out of the barrel and held it up.  'Hey, fellows - don't drink the sake! Look what's in it!'" His  companions took a look and their stomachs turned. Angrily they searched  for Ruoi, to beat him up and teach him a lesson for serving spoiled  sake. The yakuza never saw the little man again, and Li-Wan left,  content with her revenge.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;And on the next Day of Return, the little chime rang on her parent's  ancestor shrine. They rejoiced, for their daughter had come home to rest  at last.  &amp;acirc;&amp;#152;&amp;frac14;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;_____&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;A color illustrated version of this tale may be downloaded through the links on &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/novels/li-wans-revenge-ghost-story/"&gt;this page&lt;/a&gt;, which also includes Kindle, Epub, and pdf formats of this story.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Related Post:&lt;/strong&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/novels/li-wans-revenge-ghost-story/"&gt;Li-Wan's Revenge&lt;/a&gt; at my blog &lt;/p&gt;   &lt;/div&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;I haven&amp;rsquo;t said much at this blog about my main science fiction WIP&lt;sup&gt;1 &lt;/sup&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/splintegrate_/"&gt;Splintegrate&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt; (SPL),&amp;nbsp; mainly because while I&amp;rsquo;m in the thick of it, I find it difficult to talk about it.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div style="text-align: center"&gt;&lt;img id="cid_1418562" src="/files/tangled_yarn21313453929.jpg" alt="Tangled Yarn" hspace="5px" width="285"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&amp;nbsp;  &lt;br&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Nevertheless, I hit a particular bright spot today that I wanted to share. I have finally, &lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;at long last&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;, unraveled a plot conundrum that has had me boxed in in the story-telling in SPL for entirely too long.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;I&amp;rsquo;ve known there was something &amp;ldquo;not right&amp;rdquo; about the plot for quite a  while. Sussing it out has been a hair-pulling exercise extraordinaire. I  thought I had this resolved in the spring, but it turns out I did not.  Lately I went back to some basics, and did some elementary review work  of my fundamental construct with a guidebook in hand. That guidebook is  Jack M. Bickham&amp;rsquo;s classic work &lt;em&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0898799066/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=deborahchrist-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=217145&amp;amp;creative=399369&amp;amp;creativeASIN=0898799066"&gt;Scene &amp;amp; Structure&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;.&amp;nbsp;  It&amp;rsquo;s been through several editions; the one I have has as its subtitle,  &amp;ldquo;How to construct fiction with scene-by-scene flow, logic and  readability.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;It teaches exactly that.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;I recommend this book to anyone who is a) learning the basics of the  writing craft and wants to tackle novel-length works, and also to b)  anyone who is already writing in this mode, but is not absolutely  certain they&amp;rsquo;re following the right blueprint for their story&amp;rsquo;s  underpinnings.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;Scene &amp;amp; Structure&lt;/em&gt; will cure what ails ya, if you  actually apply the principles and treat this like a workbook. In  particular, he offers specific troubleshooting advice: if it feels like  your characters have &amp;ldquo;taken over the book&amp;rdquo;, go back and analyze the  scene disasters to see where you may have overplayed things and set the  story up with spin in a direction you didn&amp;rsquo;t really intend. My wording,  his sentiment. But things like that prove very practical for actually  analyzing what you&amp;rsquo;ve done, and discovering where there may have&amp;nbsp; been a  critical misstep.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;In my case, my kerfluffle stemmed from this habit I have of creating  ensemble-cast stories. (I plead innocence: that&amp;rsquo;s how I perceive them,  and so that&amp;rsquo;s how they come through the channel. But man it can be a  b*tch to get this all straight when it&amp;rsquo;s on paper!)&amp;nbsp; Plot complications  grow exponentially, not geometically, when you add more players to the  mix.&amp;nbsp; I had to review who my main point-of-view characters were,  identify who was really the foil to all this interaction, and then &amp;ndash;  only then! &amp;ndash; could I absolutely refine what the real &amp;ldquo;story questions&amp;rdquo;  were that were underlying all the story events.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;The story question is that thing you end up asking yourself: will the  guy get the girl? Will the kidnappee escape her kidnapper? Will the  hero triumph over the bad guy?&amp;nbsp; The question itself is usually pretty  simple and straightforward, but it is created by the basic  conundrum/life challenge faced by the protagonist or other significant  character.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;In a story with a lot of moving parts, as mine tend to be, and  multiple leading characters, it is easy for this story question to  become obscured by other events and closely related questions. And if  you have a character (as I often do) with three pressing things going on  at once, which of those questions is primary and the sole essential one  to the overarching story? With a multi-character cast, it is easy to  lose sight of the answers to these questions.&amp;nbsp; But if the central story  question is not highlighted and played to correctly later on, the whole  tale falls flat, and you&amp;rsquo;ll have the devil&amp;rsquo;s own time figuring out why.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;div style="text-align: center"&gt; &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/whiteboardSPL1.jpg"&gt;&lt;img src="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/whiteboardSPL1.jpg" alt="whiteboardSPL1 Untangling Splintegrate: Refining the Story Questions" width="448" height="336"&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;em&gt;Splintegrate&lt;/em&gt; spider diagram synopsis, Aug 15 2011&lt;/div&gt; &lt;p&gt;Thank you Mr. Bickham: you have helped me finally re-define and &lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;clarify&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;  my underlying story questions so that now the ending rings true. (I  think, anyway. We&amp;rsquo;ll know after it&amp;rsquo;s in print if you folks think so  too.)&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Today has been a good day in the salt mines.&lt;/strong&gt; After  quite a while of intensive analysis and always No Insight, I went to bed  with my (3&amp;prime; x 2&amp;prime;) whiteboard by the bedside and sure enough popped  awake out of a dream at 3AM, and started &lt;a href="http://www.the-organic-mind.com/spider-diagrams.html"&gt;spider-diagramming&lt;/a&gt; &lt;em&gt;The Answers&lt;/em&gt;  that were suddenly so evident to me. Rewrote this then in more of a  synopsis form. This morning I was able to look at a now very-cluttered  white board and laugh, because there are all the plot points and  connections and Correct Endings I&amp;rsquo;ve been missing&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/writing/creativity-writing/"&gt;I have my Genius to thank for this&lt;/a&gt;. We had a talk before I went to bed (indeed, we&amp;rsquo;ve been having words regularly of late), and man, did she deliver.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Huzzah!&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;I am way close to DONE, and right on schedule. Or as my heroine &lt;a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1585421472/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;amp;tag=deborahchrist-20&amp;amp;linkCode=as2&amp;amp;camp=217145&amp;amp;creative=399369&amp;amp;creativeASIN=1585421472"&gt;Julia Cameron&lt;/a&gt; says,&lt;/p&gt; &lt;h2 style="text-align: center"&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="color: #800080"&gt;&amp;ldquo;Leap, and the net will appear.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/h2&gt; &lt;p&gt;_____&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;1. Someone asked me recently what &amp;ldquo;WIP&amp;rdquo; stood for. So in case it  needs explanation, that&amp;rsquo;s common shorthand for &amp;ldquo;work in progress.&amp;rdquo;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Related Posts:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/writing/creativity-writing/"&gt;Creativity and Writing: My Genius in the Corner&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;This post originally appeared at &lt;a href="http://www.deborahteramischristian.com/"&gt;Notes From the Lizard Lair&lt;/a&gt;.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/p&gt;

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